Viola vs Pennywise OOC

[Viola]

Viola vs Pennywise!

Level 1 throwdown in the Nexus. Let's go!

Word Limit: 800 
Posts Per Player: 3 
Time Limit: 72 hours (extensions are fine, just throw a heads up)
Judge: None yet.
Other Notes: There are a couple of stormtroopers by the fountain who may side with Viola (since Pennywise is the aggressor). They're mostly fodder and I'd rather they don't impact the fight judgement too much - although she does need every advantage she can get.

And the time starts... NOW!

Things might be looking grim for Viola, but I'm going to give you a run for your money, Jade (or try to). I've gotta show all those naysayers that 0 DEF and 1 SPD is totally viable.

Also, we need a judge, so if anyone wants to volunteer, that'd be great.

[Jade Harley]

Forgot to post that I'm cool with all this!

[PepsiYuuka]

Oh you crazy kids and your level 1 nexus skirmishes. Those aaaaaaaalways go well, don't they?

Well, if you're both okay with it, I don't mind giving judging a shot.

[Viola]

Thanks, Yuuka. If Jade's cool with you judging, I am.

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Aaaannnd... Posted.

[Pennywise]

Sure, I'm cool with Yuuka being our judge!

[Jade Harley]

Hey, this is me, requesting a 24 hour extension! Had food poisoning earlier this week and then classes were not kind to my already delicate.... well, everything.

Sorry about this, Dane/Viola, I know it kinda sucks to have to wait on someone.

[Dane Regan]

Sure thing, Jade. It'd be a bit hypocritical if I tried to push you after I had an extension this round as well... Which I forgot to mention in the OOC. (But Yuuka, if you're reading, all is cool and you can ignore any post timings when judging).

[PepsiYuuka]

Of course I am definitely reading and haven't been snoozing through the whole week. Toooootally.

I'll keep that in mind.

[Pennywise]

Posted! That should have wrapped everything up, I think.

[PepsiYuuka]

Ok commeeeeents live as I read. Because that's my style.

Pre-battle:
- yes i am adding comments to the pre battle even though i'm just judging the fight. shh

- Man I get that Pennywise is evil and kinda eldritch horror-y but... that doesn't mean I'm used to it. The writing is excellent, but reading it just makes me feel like that one Marge Simpsons "kids, could you lighten up a little?" meme.
- I think the only reason I realized Pennywise's fountain was supposed to be a pile of bodies was that I had heard someone mention it elsewhere. I dunno. I'm dense.
- Also I like your alliteration. You clearly put more time into thinking out the specific wording of your posts than I.

- daboniola master of om thirst filler (i love you but sometimes the word count to content ratio of your posts annoys me)
- Wait is Omni supposed to be child-size. I always assumed he was normal size. ...I haven't watched much FMA.

- Sheep aren't the animals I would think of being led to the slaughter, though I understand the comparison of humans to sheep is more common. I dunno why this stuck out to me.

- The "donned across his face" sentence feels strangely clumsy to me. I don't know what it is.

- hello sudden stormtroopers
- Leave it to Viola to ruin the fun. Buy some taste in balloon colors, Viola.

Round Numero Uno
- You see I like your writing better when you have a limited word count so it doesn't feel like every little thing you do takes hours, Daboniola.
- As in, I at least like the sense of urgency in this post and the sudden-ness of it.
- bye viola's hand
- I will say that she seems... strangely into helping other people, compared to how she was earlier, at least. Maybe I'm just thinking of her wrong because I assume all your characters are assholes by default?

- thanks for murdering the barely-named secondaries i was starting to kinda like, pennywise (i know it's your thing)
- Aside from that this post has a lot of explanations and not much fighty. That's cool.
- title drop,

Dai Ni Roundo
- oh shes doing it. shes using The Move
- We need a dead Violas counter. You should put one in your roster.
- This is like an absurd amount of action compared to the last post, honestly. I kinda like it.
- boy pennywise abuses that malleability well

- Pennywise just seems to... hardly react to being hurt, despite taking on a girl with an ATK of 5 with a DEF of 1. I get that It's an amorphous alien being, but.
- Otherwise, Great! It's Horrible. Just as I expected.

round three because im out of languages to u
- Viola, is Pennywise's word choice rubbing off on you. It seems like it.
- Move Title Drop,
- typoed hit for hilt, silly,
- Oh hey some mentioning of the surroundings and dead stormtroopers. Nice.

- It has literally taken me until this post to realize Pennywise does not, in fact, have two colors of blood, and the red stuff is instead referring to the fact it just ate two people and a hand. Oh. Not sure what that says other than that I'm still dense.
- It's held on surprisingly long given that It has a sword in Its head. Commendable. How does It talk?



Overall
- overall wow that was horrifying
- I'm serious I have no distaste for gore at all and that was pretty horrific.
- Both of you really tore the hell out of each other. I like that in an all out Nexus Level 1 Brawl. Good on you, low-defense high-attack newbies.
- Physically, I'm sure Viola took way less damage. As in she was not stabbed through the head.
- But she's also not a horrifying interdimensional fear monster so.
- She also used a Super, which IMO, is kind of a big plus for her. It really helped her avoid damage in post 2.
- That being said, Pennywise's writing was really good, and something must be said for that. It's just got a very... not exactly rich, but fitting word choice in Its posts. Very horror and I like.
- Not that Daboniola's writing is bad, but y'know, by comparison Viola's posts are not as striking to read. Beyond recognizing "oh she's doing that thing i saw in move approval".


Conclusion
So I think I've just got to give it to Pennywise. You horrifying demon thingy you, you're just so hate-lovable.
You have Viola at your mercy and I assume you're probably gonna kill her. ...Eeeeventually.

That being said, you tore yourselves apart brutally in this, so damage time!

Pennywise is gonna take 15, because for god's sake It's arm is off. Also It got stabbed a lot. ...Yyyyep.

Viola, even though you lost, you DID seem to just generally take less damage (despite your 0 def) thanks to that super, so you'll be taking 12. Mostly because your arm is also off but you got stabbed somewhat less. Good job!

[Dane Regan]

- I will say that she seems... strangely into helping other people, compared to how she was earlier, at least. Maybe I'm just thinking of her wrong because I assume all your characters are assholes by default?

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- We need a dead Violas counter. You should put one in your roster.

- That actually hurts, Yuuka. ;_;

- I was totally going to do that.

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Anyway, gg Pennywise. Looks like Viola is going to have a fun time soon.

[Jade Harley]

Oh shoot, now I actually gotta decide what to do?!

(Thanks for judging Yuuka. Also, thank you for the frickin legit fight Viola!)

[Pennywise]

Sorry for the delay, Viola. I'll have a concluding post up tonight!