The emperor of mankind, 13-jzall's alt

[The Emperor of Mankind]

CHARACTER NAME: The emperor of mankind

CHARACTER SOURCE: Warhammer 40k

CHARACTER HISTORY: The Emperor of mankind was born around 0 AD, his soul was created when 1000 nearly immortal shamans committed suicide together to make a soul powerful enough to be immune to the powers of chaos and protect humanity for the countless millennia to come. In the year 30,000, Horus fell to the ruinous powers and joined forces with the other traitor primarchs to attempt to destroy the Imperium, after a battle on Horus’s ship the emperor almost died and was sent to the golden throne which is where he has sat for the last 10,000 years. While protecting humanity from the terrors of the warp that would storm terra from the webway, a bit of his soul fractured and fell away as it normally did. Omni stole this piece before the chaos gods could and brought it into the omniverse.


PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION: The emperor is on a giant golden throne covered in skulls. On it is a giant human skeleton who is still intact. Small amounts of rotting flesh can be seen hanging around bones. On his left eye is a red eyepiece which most likely allows him to see as his previous eye has rotted away. The emperor used to have a right hand but it disappeared when he heard about the Inquisition and has not been seen since. Normally, the emperor would not be able to speak but thanks to the technology of the 21st century, he can now talk to all of his loyal subjects through a text to speech device. The emperor’s throne hovers 30 cm above the ground, allowing him to move. From base to skull, the emperor is 12 feet tall.


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STATS:
ATK:2
DEF:3
SPD:0
TEC:5

STARTING PROFICIENCIES:
remote control (600); Debuff (1000), area attack (600), remote materialize (600), ranged (1000)

STARTING POWERS:
None
STARTING MOVES:
Summon bucket (600) requires debuff, ranged and homing prof

After a 5 second charge, a small bucket flies out of the emperor's throne, it will fly at the speed of an arrow over an enemy and dump water on them, possibly stopping a move from channelling as long as the emperor's TEC is higher than the enemie's TEC. It will then fly into them and deal a low amount of damage. He can also leave the water in there to deal slightly more damage but the water effect won't happen. The move takes a low amount of energy to aim and use. It will continue going for up to 50 metres (164.042 feet). The bucket will change size and shape but it will always be metal and contain around 5 gallons of water. The bucket can not get smaller than 10 cm wide and no bigger than 50. It can be used while moving and will home in on an enemy within 5 metres of it after the inital launch, getting within at most two metres of them before it flies at them like a normal projectile, dropping to the floor after it hits or travels 3 metres. The emperor can use other moves along with the bucket as long as they don't take too much effort. It can turn reasonably tightly but it will have to slow down or get flung in the direction it's turning, often overshooting an enemy.

I confirm that I have read and agreed to the Rules of Conduct. Yep

Where did you find us? Can't remember

[Omni]

So he's on a throne ... how does he move around? Is he flying? Is this a serious app or are you just lulzing around?

[13-Jzall]

I hadn't thought about that since I was in a rush. I'll probably just abandon this and then maybe pick it up later when I've figured it out.

[13-Jzall]

Moving this into WIP

[13-Jzall]

I'm pretty happy with the joining form at the moment. If some staff could say if it's good or if I need to work on it, that'd be great.

[13-Jzall]

Bump

[13-Jzall]

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[Alex]

Please re-check the section on Writing Moves as it pertains to your think with the Bucket. Your missing some information.

[The Emperor of Mankind]

Updated the move.

[13-Jzall]

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[Mark]

You have Remote Control listed twice under your starting Profs.

Summon Bucket: You have Ranged Materialize listed; can this be summoned far away from him? If it's just summoned from his side you don't need that proficiency. Is there a cast time? Can it be used while moving? When you say effort do you mean concentration, or energy/stamina drain? You have both Remote Control and Homing listed here, does it home automatically or does he need to control it? Can he use other moves while this is going? For the move-cancellation effect, you'll need to mention something about the opponent having lower TEC or something if you want to pull that off. Something like "potentially stopping a move from being channeled depending on TEC" would be fine.

[The Emperor of Mankind]

updated

[The Emperor of Mankind]

B U M P

[13-Jzall]

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[13-Jzall]

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[Mark]

I still need to know if there's a cast time and if he needs to maintain concentration or if he can use other moves while it's in effect. Also, how long does it home before it stops? How tight can it turn to follow the target?

[The Emperor of Mankind]

updated

[Mark]

I'm not exactly sure what you mean by staying within at most 2 meters of them for 10 seconds before falling. Does that mean once it gets to 2 meters away it isn't locked on anymore and it just turns into a regular projectile? I also still need to know how precisely it can move in the air, like how wide would it need to turn to reverse direction or however you want to describe it.

[The Emperor of Mankind]

updated

[Mark]

Alright, looks good to me. I think you know the drill.

Name:  The emperor of mankind
Spent OM: 4400
Consumed OM (0); (for consumed items or OM permanently lost from respecs, etc)
Proficiencies (3800); Remote Control Proficiency (600); Debuff Proficiency (1000), Area Attack Proficiency (600), Ranged Materialize Proficiency (600), Ranged Proficiency (1000)
Powers (0/8000);
Moves (600); Summon bucket (600)
Super Moves (0);
Transformations (0);
Assists (0);
Items (0);
Artefacts: None
Bases (0);
Unlocks (0);
Base stats:
ATK: 2
DEF: 3
SPD: 0
TEC: 5

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