Bonus Request Topic/Quest Turn-in Topic

[Aquamarine]

Yeah I will make sure to continue at the quality I have been typing at before.

[Guu]

I Kill for the Trees

Personal Storyline

Participating characters: Guu, Ice Bear, Undyne, Sans

Total character count including spaces:
Guu: 31,524
Ice Bear: 30,628
Undyne: 38,133
Sans: 19,190

Total word count:
Guu: 5,678
Ice Bear: 5,585
Undyne: 6,908
Sans: 3,421

Calculated on Google docs

[Jade Harley]

I Kill for the Trees

Personal Storyline

Participating characters: Guu, Ice Bear, Undyne, Sans

Total character count including spaces:
Guu: 31,524
Ice Bear: 30,628
Undyne: 38,133
Sans: 19,190

Total word count:
Guu: 5,678
Ice Bear: 5,585
Undyne: 6,908
Sans: 3,421

Calculated on Google docs

Participation Bonus granted! Great job, guys. :-)

Guu: 311.61 OM
Ice Bear: 301.36 OM
Undyne: 378.99 OM
Sans: 189.48 OM

Your logs will be updated in a bit!

Daniel's Edit: Updated the logs to this.

[Cirno]

http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=8958 aka. Lakefront property closing papers

Quest or Personal Storyline? Personal
 
Participating characters (please list): Yuuka Kazami, Cirno, Clownpiece
 
Total character count including spaces:
Cirno: 30,600 Characters
Yuuka: 35,967 Characters
Clownpiece: 38,474 Characters

Total word count:
Cirno: 5,820 Words
Yuuka: 6,519 Words
Clownpiece:6,800 Words

[Jack Darby]

Nevermind this post, going to do more before I consider it good enough.

[King Ghidorah]

http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=8958 aka. Lakefront property closing papers

Quest or Personal Storyline? Personal
 
Participating characters (please list): Yuuka Kazami, Cirno, Clownpiece
 
Total character count including spaces:
Cirno: 30,600 Characters
Yuuka: 35,967 Characters
Clownpiece: 38,474 Characters

Total word count:
Cirno: 5,820 Words
Yuuka: 6,519 Words
Clownpiece:6,800 Words

 Bonus cannon - FIRE!

Participation Fallout: 

Cirno: 306 OM
Yuuka: 359.67 OM
Clownpiece: 384.74 OM

Someone will be along to take care of the particulars shortly.

Logs updated! - Jadedit.

[Jack Darby]

Quest or Personal Storyline?  Quest
http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?...#pid116379

 
Participating characters (please list): Matthew "Composite Man"  Mcginnis / Various NPCs
 
Total character count including spaces:
41576


Total word count: 7705 
 

[Blink]

Quest or Personal Storyline?  Quest
http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?...#pid116379

 
Participating characters (please list): Matthew "Composite Man"  Mcginnis / Various NPCs
 
Total character count including spaces:
41576


Total word count: 7705 
 

Hey Matt, unfortunately we don't do quest rewards anymore and this thread does not qualify for a writing bonus. You still got a decent amount of OM out of it, though, so good job!

[Android 17]

Link: http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=6273
Submission: Participation/Writing Bonus
Quest (Quest was approved; resubmitting for Participation/Writing bonuses following changes to Quests)

Characters Involved - Trixie, A17

17 (MS Word)
Character Count: 39365
Word Count: 6945

Trixie (MS Wurd)
Character Count: 49583
Word Count: 9297

[Aquamarine]

Solid Light Studying
Quest or Personal Storyline: Quest (There Are No Lines)
Participating characters (please list): Aquamarine
Total character count including spaces: 26492 (Through WordCounter)
Total word count: 5017 (Through WordCounter)

Hey Aqua, sorry but I'm going to ask you to do some more in this one before asking for your OM reward.

The requires word count for this quest  is 5,000 to 10,000 depending on writing quality. While your quality is good, it would need to be exemplary (or with partners) for me to take 50% off of the maximum requirement. As it stands right now, I'd probably be willing to say it's good enough for 25% off the max (7,500), but I would shoot for adding more to this story then just hitting the minimum.

I hope you keep it going.

Ok I made it to around 75%, so it should be finished for now. If I still need to do a bit more I have a epilogue prepared just in case though.

Solid Light Studying
Quest or Personal Storyline: Quest (There Are No Lines)
Participating characters (please list): Aquamarine
Total character count including spaces: 38831 (Through WordCounter)
Total word count: 7314 (Through WordCounter)

[Jade Harley]

Link: http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=6273
Submission: Participation/Writing Bonus
Quest (Quest was approved; resubmitting for Participation/Writing bonuses following changes to Quests)

Characters Involved - Trixie, A17

17 (MS Word)
Character Count: 39365
Word Count: 6945

Trixie (MS Wurd)
Character Count: 49583
Word Count: 9297

A17: (GREAT & PARTICIPATION) 590.475 OM
Trixie: (EXEMPLARY & PARTICIPATION) 991.66 OM

Logs updated!

[Blink]

Solid Light Studying
Quest or Personal Storyline: Quest (There Are No Lines)
Participating characters (please list): Aquamarine
Total character count including spaces: 26492 (Through WordCounter)
Total word count: 5017 (Through WordCounter)

Hey Aqua, sorry but I'm going to ask you to do some more in this one before asking for your OM reward.

The requires word count for this quest  is 5,000 to 10,000 depending on writing quality. While your quality is good, it would need to be exemplary (or with partners) for me to take 50% off of the maximum requirement. As it stands right now, I'd probably be willing to say it's good enough for 25% off the max (7,500), but I would shoot for adding more to this story then just hitting the minimum.

I hope you keep it going.

Ok I made it to around 75%, so it should be finished for now. If I still need to do a bit more I have a epilogue prepared just in case though.

Solid Light Studying
Quest or Personal Storyline: Quest (There Are No Lines)
Participating characters (please list): Aquamarine
Total character count including spaces: 38831 (Through WordCounter)
Total word count: 7314 (Through WordCounter)

If you have the epilogue 'prepared' already, no harm in sliding it in there.

I judge this quest complete! Aquamarine gains increased influence with the Empire.

[Takanomiya Hijiri]

Thread: Easy Money? Not So Much.
Quest/Storyline: Quest (Hand of the Empire)
Participating Characters: Takanomiya Hijiri
Total Character Count*: 70,031
Total Word Count*: 12,567

*According to OpenOffice.

[Jade Harley]

Thread: Easy Money? Not So Much.
Quest/Storyline: Quest (Hand of the Empire)
Participating Characters: Takanomiya Hijiri
Total Character Count*: 70,031
Total Word Count*: 12,567

*According to OpenOffice.

Quest complete! Fantastic writing, friend! Your reward iiiiiis: Increased Influence with the Empire and an Exemplary writing bonus of 697.24 OM!

Log updated!

[Android 17]

Thread: Heat of the Moment (http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=5313), submitted for Great/Exemp Bonus
Artefact Quest
Characters: Android Seventeen
Word Count: 23,893
Character: 136,762

[King Ghidorah]

Thread: Heat of the Moment (http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=5313), submitted for Great/Exemp Bonus
Artefact Quest
Characters: Android Seventeen
Word Count: 23,893
Character: 136,762

*fires the Bonus Cannon*
Great Writing Bonus: 683.81


This was some fine writing. Stylistically, it could have done with some proof-reading, particularly in the early posts (repeated words, words that were replaced but the word they were replacing wasn't deleted, the occasionally twisted sentence-structure), and the dialogue was a little bit stilted in places, but I genuinely laughed at the magical and mysterious ore 'anthracite'. In terms of plot-structure it all followed quite naturally, and I liked that you managed to work the extremely high mortality rate of the astronomers in as a justification for Julius not wanting the artefact. The fact that both the dragon and the heroes that killed it were all still in the volcano's magma-chamber came as a nice twist, suggesting an interesting story in and of itself.  

It would have been nice if some of the astronomer's besides Julius had received more development, but you were juggling a ton of npcs (possibly a few more than you needed?).  

Honestly, the only thing really keeping this from Exemplary was the spotty proofing.


    #JiggyKoopaNever4get

Someone with greater powers than I will be along to cater you some delicious Omnilium crepes.

Log updated! - Jadedit.

[Jade Harley]

Thread: Beyond the Mountains of Madness (http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=7100), submitted for Writing Bonuses!
Artefact Quest
Characters: Jade Harley, Amber Veritz

AMBER (Wordcounter.net)
Word Count: 10,822 words
Character Count: 60,373 characters

JADE (Wordcounter.net)
Word Count: 29,157 words
Character Count: 167,767 characters

39,979 words and 228,140 characters overall!

[13-Jzall]

Advent thunder: http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=8761
Group storyline
Participating characters (please list): Shu, Asriel Dreamurr, Alexander Blakesly and 13-jzall
Total character count including spaces:
Shu: 21, 184
Asriel: 14, 393
Alex: 10,349
13: 4908
Total word counts:
Shu: 3740
Asriel: 2599
Alex: 1789
13: 922
Mainly for the others if they ever return since my writing was terrible.

[Ash]

It did not occur to me to claim this, until it was nominated as 'best' story for the month, and I said that if it won I'd turn it in. xD

T5: Challenge Accepted
-Personal Storyline

Participating characters:
-Ash
-Harlan Higgs
-Storyteller

Total character count including spaces (Done in WordCounter.net)
-Ash: 16,510 characters
-Harlan: 4,070 characters
-Storyteller: 8,313 characters

Total word count (Done in WordCounter.net)
-Ash: 3,054 words
-Harlan: 729 words
-Storyteller: 1,435 words

[The Humble Sage]

*prepares the bonus cannon*

Advent thunder: http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=8761
Group storyline
Participating characters (please list): Shu, Asriel Dreamurr, Alexander Blakesly and 13-jzall
Total character count including spaces:
Shu: 21, 184
Asriel: 14, 393
Alex: 10,349
13: 4908
Total word counts:
Shu: 3740
Asriel: 2599
Alex: 1789
13: 922
Mainly for the others if they ever return since my writing was terrible.

although no one has enough words in this thread to qualify for a writing bonus, you do all qualify for the participation bonus.

Shu: 210.77 OM
Asriel: 142.77 OM
Alexander Blakesly: 103.28 OM
13-Jzall: 41.77 OM

Asriel and 13: PLEASE make sure that all OOC notes are contained within [ quote ][/quote ] brackets so that you don't get OM for them. Thanks!
Also, 13, I was extremely confused by the two posts you have in the middle of the thread, since they seem to be covering the same information. You have a note about the first post being one you didn't like, but being unable to delete replies. We do not allow members to delete posts on IC forums to make sure that no one is gaming the system or breaking canon. If you need a post deleted, just let us know in the help desk, and a staff member can delete the post for you. This is important to do, since you technically got OM for that post even if its not "canonical". If you have any questions, shoot me a PM.


SAGEDIT: deleted the post that was to be ignored.

It did not occur to me to claim this, until it was nominated as 'best' story for the month, and I said that if it won I'd turn it in. xD

T5: Challenge Accepted
-Personal Storyline

Participating characters:
-Ash
-Harlan Higgs
-Storyteller

Total character count including spaces (Done in WordCounter.net)
-Ash: 16,510 characters
-Harlan: 4,070 characters
-Storyteller: 8,313 characters

Total word count (Done in WordCounter.net)
-Ash: 3,054 words
-Harlan: 729 words
-Storyteller: 1,435 words

same story here, not enough words to qualify for a writing bonus. ash and Higgs do get a participation bonus though (not the storyteller though)

Ash: 165.12 OM
Harlan Higgs: 40.7 OM


Someone with the appropriate permissions will update your logs soon!

ALL LOGS UPD8'D. - Jadedit.