07-12-2017, 05:34 PM
This is quick feedback as I'm on my phone but:
Hematite Gloves:
>How long does it take to store and remove weapons? (You might want to add the storage aspect to your weapon descriptions instead or as well)
>How long does the blast last?
>What is the range of the blast?
Axel's Chakrams
>How big are they?
>What do they look like, give a description.
>Unless you're blocking in a large area, you don't need area defense.
>Unless you're focusing and channelling energy into the weapons to act as a shield, blocking with them doesn't require an additional 300OM unless they change forms.
Zexicon's Lexicon
>Recording information on people wouldn't require OM. You'd just need insight normally. Writing a diary on people is fodder.
>What part of it has a 200ft range? The insight?
>How big is the shell?
For balancing, you should rely on someone else.
Hematite Gloves:
>How long does it take to store and remove weapons? (You might want to add the storage aspect to your weapon descriptions instead or as well)
>How long does the blast last?
>What is the range of the blast?
Axel's Chakrams
>How big are they?
>What do they look like, give a description.
>Unless you're blocking in a large area, you don't need area defense.
>Unless you're focusing and channelling energy into the weapons to act as a shield, blocking with them doesn't require an additional 300OM unless they change forms.
Zexicon's Lexicon
>Recording information on people wouldn't require OM. You'd just need insight normally. Writing a diary on people is fodder.
>What part of it has a 200ft range? The insight?
>How big is the shell?
For balancing, you should rely on someone else.