Official Move Approval IV

[Omni]

Ranged Proficiency: (300) 

Mask of Doom
Dr. Doom can fire green mystical energy from the eye slits of his mask. It takes 2 seconds to fire from his eyes. The width and height of the blast of energy is about two inches. The energy can reach up to 45 feet and the energy can pick speed to around 50 miles per hour. Over use of the move will force Doom to rest his magic for about 20 seconds.

So it's ... two blasts, right? Or do they form together into one blast?

Yes it is two blast that come out of his eye slits in his mask.

So please edit the move to include that description.

Strazio!

We decided that the Rock is okay to stay as a Site NPC. However he is still a Site NPC, not your personal NPC, so I'm gonna have to disapprove.

Black Heart - (600, Ranged Proficiency, Physical Strength Proficiency.)



A key blade that was created out of the Darkness from within Repliku's Heart. The Key-Blade can also be used as a sword, or as a ranged weapon. This blade has a length of about 22 inches long, and a width of about 10 inches. The blade can be summoned in a flash of darkness by Repliku. This key blade can be swung incredibly fast by Repliku and is usually meant to be wielded one-handed, leaving his hand free for another weapon, or move. This is moderately tiring for Repliku to use. The way it can be used by itself as a ranged weapon is by being "thrown" at an opponent, usually aimed at the head and then being teleported back to Repliku's hand, as once it leaves his hand it can only be gone a few seconds before it will rematerialize in his hands. This has a maximum range of 75 feet, at present. This can be thrown 2 seconds after it is successfully summoned. This travels at speeds of 30 MPH.

The key blade can also "lock" people's hearts, preventing the formation of a Heartless or Nobody should they be consumed by the Heartless. It can also release the Heart from a Heartless, returning the heart to the Nobody that was created when the Heart was consumed, turning them back into themselves.

Furthermore, this can act as an "All Access Pass" for Repliku when he has access to a base of his own, able to be used as a key to well.. anything he owns.

Lastly, the Key Blade can only be wielded by Repliku unless he performs an "Inheritance Ceremony" that he doesn't remember how to do with ones he deems worthy of the Key Blade. Granted they'd have to buy their own version, but still.


Cut down the Staff of the Dark Mage to a single spell for now.
The staff of the Dark Mage (900, Ranged Proficiency, Debuff Proficiency, Physical Strength Proficiency):



The staff of the dark mage is made out of a blackened wood that is as strong as Iron, thus allowing it to withstand clashing with most weapons. It can be used to physically assault an opponent, or it can be used in the way it was designed for, namely for magical assaults against an enemy. This comes with a few pre-recorded spells inside of it that can be cast by the Staff itself. This staff is about 20 inches long.  It's got two red gemstones in it that act as the primary focus points of magic.

 - Lightning:  This uses the Debuff Proficiency.  Holding the staff aloft, Repliku will yell out "Lightning" and a single lightning bolt will come down at an opponent within a range of 35 feet of him and strike them, making it harder for them to hold weapons for seven seconds because their nervous system will feel like it's on fire. This also uses the Ranged Proficiency. There is, however, another use of the Lightning Spell that can be done, namely charging the staff with an electrical current, so that it can be swung and do the same amount of damage Lightning does, but with a melee component. Lightning does Medium Damage on an opponent. This cannot be used with other moves, except those that use the Staff of the Dark Mage. The Lightning attack comes straight down, and cannot change direction, or home. It can be blocked easily. Furthermore, the shock effect debuff only applies to those who use weapons that have a composition of metal entirely and must be conductive. The Lightning comes straight down from the sky at an opponent, thanks to the Ranged Materialize Proficiency that Repliku has. The Shock Effect also has another caveat,  weapons that have magical properties or are sufficiently high tech would be unaffected by the shock effect of this spell.

Both variations of Lightning can be used while moving. Both of them are only powerful enough to deal Medium Damage to anyone who is hit by them, akin to getting zapped by a Tazer. Both require only 4 seconds to cast. The staff requires ten seconds of cool down before it can cast Lightning once more, in either fashion. Neither version requires any of Repliku's focus, other than raising the staff and saying "Lightning" in the case of the ranged version of the technique. The melee version requires both hands however.

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Approved, however!

Adding a few more moves that I thought up.

Spell Channel - Fire (300, Debuff, Physical Strength):

Spell Channel Fire is an ability that allows Repliku to channel a Fire Spell into the blade Soul Eater. For RP purposes this causes the blade to be coated in black flames. This takes 3 seconds for him to charge up, and is moderately taxing on his stamina. It's instinctive, and as such doesn't require any level of concentration for him to use. What this does do is allow him to burn his opponents for six seconds per attack that is done when this is charged up. It can be used with other moves that don't require both hands. In addition, it can be used while moving as he has to get close enough to his opponent in order to slash them to make this attack work.

Spell Channel - Ice (300, Debuff, Physical Strength.):

Spell Channel Ice is an ability that allows Repliku to channel an Ice Spell into the blade Soul Eater. For RP purposes this causes the blade to be coated in dark blue ice. This takes 3 seconds for him to charge up, and is moderately taxing on his stamina. It's instinctive, and as such doesn't require any level of concentration for him to use. What this does do is allow him to freeze his opponents for six seconds per attack that is done when this is charged up. It can be used with other moves that don't require both hands. In addition, it can be used while moving as he has to get close enough to his opponent in order to slash them to make this attack work.

It doesn't work  (300, Insight, Master Acrobat):  

A move that allows Repliku to use a series of gymnastics moves, such as flips, spins and twists to avoid moves that are of his Tier level. In other words, it's a move that allows him to dodge regular moves that are headed his way. While he can only keep this up for about 20 seconds at a time, and he can't dodge attacks of a Stronger Prime this could still prove to be a useful ability for him to have in the long run.

Fire: Burn his opponent for six seconds? You mean set on fire? Please clarify. Can these flames be put out?

Ice: No. Six seconds of immobilization (I assume, it just says 'freeze them') for 3 seconds of movable-charge is crazy talk.

Master Acrobat move: that's just master acrobat.

Just as an FYI, as you can see with the wait times the move approval topic is overloaded, so it might be good to get friends to look at stuff first to help with some of the more obvious oversights.