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Official Move Approval IV
@Cirno:
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(07-05-2017, 03:57 PM)Cirno Wrote: Ice aura (300) (requires area attack, ranged proficiency, debuff)

Cirno has a simple ice aura  that will passively affect anyone that is within five feet of her. effects are shivering, frostbite (this is prolonged effects of being near her), etc. This aura will slow and damage the person (slowly and a small chance of causing actual frostbite on the colder parts of ones body. This might happen if they last extended times also.) This move has minimal concentration and energy consumption (It is like doing stretches before working out. Not to exhausting but still having some energy consumption to them.). The debuff slows anyone down 4-5% while inside also but that slowing stops once someone has left the circle of effect. the aura is visable with frost on the ground for limited times and slowly but surely icicles will start forming on the ground and they will grow. It follows her around like a trail (this is fodder) and the frost will leave after a couple minutes in any verse. (this is also fodder). To actually activate it takes a couple seconds of ramping up her magic exhaust to actually be cold enough to do any effects and it can stay on for as long as it needs to be though after a few hours of use it will cause her to sweat and over heat.

Does this cause damage alongside the debuff effect? If it only causes the chilliness, it's approved![/spoiler]

@Strazio:
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(07-06-2017, 12:58 AM)Strazio Rockwell Wrote: Widget Finner’s Destructo Spinner (600) - Requires Ranged Proficiency, Area of Attack Proficiency

Given to Strazio as a gift from the prodigious inventor Widget Finner, the destructo spinner is a weapon of pure destruction. When deactivated it takes the form of a small hand toy, that consists of a small bearing in the center three-lobed metal structure designed to spin along its axis. To activate the weapon Strazio can hold it in his palm and pour magickal energy into it. Once activated the weapon will begin to spin rapidly and float a few inches above Strazio’s hand. After about three seconds of concentration during which Strazio can move but cannot attack, the spinner becomes a razor-sharp spinning disc of pure energy. The disc is about three feet in diameter and can be thrown about as fast as a frisbee. Once thrown the spinner will attempt to return back to Strazio, unless it is deflected or otherwise unable to return.

Alternatively, Strazio can spend six seconds charging and expend 1 HP to supercharge the spinner. Instead of acting as a sawblade the spinner explodes on impact, engulfing an area of about 15 feet in diameter. If he uses this attack he must spend about ten minutes resummoning the spinner and is usually unable to do this during combat.

Dude, that's legit! Approved!

Quote:Avatar of Rage (1500) - Tier Two Powered-up Form

ATK - 11
DEF - 0
SPD - 10
TEC - 2

Strazio’s body breaks apart and vaporizes, leaving behind only his skull, spine, and ribcage. The bones left behind darken and become an onyx-like material. After a few moments the bones ignite with a bright white fire. The fire becomes a vaguely humanoid shape and two yellow-hued coals act as the avatar’s eyes. In this form Strazio loses the ability to speak and becomes incredibly hostile. He loses all sense of self-preservation and may even strike allies should they get in his way.

Uhm, even cooler!! Approved!

Quote:Rock ‘n’ Rock Bottom (800) - Tier Two Offensive Super Move

Strazio sends out a text message on his Dataverse Device and after a few seconds a wrestling ring erupts out of the ground, trapping his foe in the center of the ring. The Rock appears from out of nowhere and (after a dramatic introduction) tags into the ring. After a bit of smack talk The Rock walks up to his opponent and grabs them with one arm around their upper body. He then lifts them up and immediately slams them back onto the mat, following the slam with his own weight. The Rock then rolls off the opponent just in time for Strazio to jump off the ropes and deliver a wicked flying elbow. Once the elbow lands the ring dematerializes and The Rock leaves.

Gonna leave this one up for Alex or Omni. Still super rad, though.[/spoiler]

@Shinmen Takezō
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(07-06-2017, 02:31 AM)Shinmen Takezō Wrote: "Eyes like a Demon" 300
Requires: Ranged Proficiency
Takezo's glare has always given people chills, but since entering the Omniverse, it has slowly taken on new meaning. The sadistic joy he gains from slaughtering those who stand in his path, mixed with his sociopath emotional distance can both be seen in his gaze. It is chilling.

A single victim of this glare is frozen in place in fear. This is not an active fear-inducing effect that must be maintained. Takezo focuses on this single target and can maintain the effect for up to twenty seconds. He can move, but attacking breaks the effects. A victim of the fear effect cannot be effected again for three minutes after either breaking free, or taking damage to end the effect.

This move relies heavily on eye contact. Avoiding it may be difficult (especially for low Tec fighters) but it neutralizes this effect. Characters who are blind are immune to this effect.

Approved.

Quote:"Razor Wind" 300
Requires: Ranged Proficiency
Katana Variant Technique
Takezo's overwhelming strength allows him to flick his sword to create thin, high pressure blades of air that extend his reach beyond that of his physical weapon. Inspired by the yokai Kamaitachi, a wiesel with sickle like claws that hides in the wind, the attacks leave small, bloodless cuts on any victim they land upon.

The attack is very light and very swift, doing small amounts of accumulated damage. It can be used in rapid succession, with each blade capable of reaching fifty feet before. After that, it tapers off until the winds simply dissipate at seventy five feet.

Approved![/spoiler]

@MADBULL34:
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(07-06-2017, 10:33 AM)MADBULL34 Wrote: [Image: 0gJxXG.gif]

PAINT IT RED (Tier 1 Power-up)
ATK + 2
DEF + 2
SPD + 1

The fury and passion that drives Sergeant John Estes' twisted sense of honor and duty comes to a boil, pushing his body through the pains of battle and unleashing his righteous justice with even greater ferocity on those he damns as criminals. The violent policeman had rightly earned the nickname of "Mad Bull," as when he utilizes this powerup, he becomes more offensively and defensively strong, but becomes even more stubborn and short-sighted at seeing his adversary defeated at any cost.


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Approved![/spoiler]
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