05-29-2018, 10:35 PM
Quote:Errands of a Storm Demon - Missed this one.
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Ash the Storm Demon
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Nice piercing.
I award this post the GREAT bonus.
OM Awarded: 252.84
What I like about your writing style is how you choose to zoom in and zoom out of the story in unorthodox places. It forces the reader to the see what the writer wants them to see, and to keep anything else clouded in a fog-of-war.
This thread was a fun romp, the tale of Corruscant through Ash's eyes.
Your exit seemed pretty rushed though...
*OM IMPACTO*
-Kellyedit


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