07-06-2017, 03:00 PM
Lightning Gloves - (Physical Proficiency, Debuff Proficiency) - 600 OM
[spoiler]Durable black gloves that fit snugly, covering the whole hand. Akihiko Sanada's weapon of choice. Can be used to punch, slap, backhand, choke, and generally do anything you could do barehanded.
Over the years they've become saturated with Akihiko's fighting spirit, imbuing them with his Persona's lightning. By taking four seconds of deep concentration during which he can't move or cast, Makoto can coat the gloves in electricity, which moderately shocks on impact. This effect lasts for 15 seconds, and is tiring enough to only be used three times at most per fight. Five seconds of cooldown are necessary before applying a second time.
Opponents who receive five or more direct, undefended hits while the effect is active feel the effect of the constant electric discharge on their nervous system, decreasing their fine motor skills (decreases TEC). This effect lasts for ten seconds. The debuff itself doesn't cost any additional effort to apply, as long as the above condition is met.[/spoiler]
Also wondering if I could change this:
[spoiler]Zio: Revised - (Ranged Proficiency, Debuff Proficiency) - 600 OM
A yellow bolt of lightning two meters long and three centimeters in diameter, when thrown like a lance it discharges on contact, burning flesh (or equivalent) but can't stun. Can be loosed as quickly as Makoto can make a grasping motion with a free hand. When thrown has the approximate speed of a bullet, and can hit targets no farther than 60 meters away provided it's accurately aimed. Owing to its simplicity, it's not very powerful nor very taxing, and can be cast while moving around or using other moves.
It's possible to upgrade this spell by charging for up to two seconds, the resulting bolt is comparatively slower, and has a range limited to 20 meters. This version is more damaging, as signified by a brighter glow, but it's also more tiring, forces the user to only move at a crawl, and prevents them from using other moves until the charging, which can't be externally interrupted, is complete. The increased electric charge is enough to immobilize a targeted limb, stopping its movement entirely for one second, after which movement returns to normal over the course of three seconds.[/spoiler]
Into this:
[spoiler]Zio: Revised - (Ranged Proficiency, Debuff Proficiency) - 600 OM
A yellow bolt of lightning two meters long and three centimeters in diameter, when thrown like a lance it discharges on contact, burning flesh (or equivalent) but can't stun. Can be loosed as quickly as Makoto can make a grasping motion with a free hand. When thrown has the approximate speed of a bullet, and can hit targets no farther than 60 meters away provided it's accurately aimed. Owing to its simplicity, it's not very powerful nor very taxing, and can be cast while moving around or using other moves.
It's possible to upgrade this spell by charging for up to five seconds, the resulting bolt is comparatively slower, and has a range limited to 20 meters. This version is more damaging, as signified by a brighter glow, but it's also more tiring, forces the user to only move at a crawl, and prevents them from using other moves until the charging, which can't be externally interrupted, is complete. The increased electric charge is enough to immobilize a targeted limb, stopping its movement entirely for double the time used to charge the move.[/spoiler]
I realize it's a big mechanical change which would probably require selling the old move and buying the new one, if it's even approved.
Sorry for all the trouble >_>
[spoiler]Durable black gloves that fit snugly, covering the whole hand. Akihiko Sanada's weapon of choice. Can be used to punch, slap, backhand, choke, and generally do anything you could do barehanded.
Over the years they've become saturated with Akihiko's fighting spirit, imbuing them with his Persona's lightning. By taking four seconds of deep concentration during which he can't move or cast, Makoto can coat the gloves in electricity, which moderately shocks on impact. This effect lasts for 15 seconds, and is tiring enough to only be used three times at most per fight. Five seconds of cooldown are necessary before applying a second time.
Opponents who receive five or more direct, undefended hits while the effect is active feel the effect of the constant electric discharge on their nervous system, decreasing their fine motor skills (decreases TEC). This effect lasts for ten seconds. The debuff itself doesn't cost any additional effort to apply, as long as the above condition is met.[/spoiler]
Also wondering if I could change this:
[spoiler]Zio: Revised - (Ranged Proficiency, Debuff Proficiency) - 600 OM
A yellow bolt of lightning two meters long and three centimeters in diameter, when thrown like a lance it discharges on contact, burning flesh (or equivalent) but can't stun. Can be loosed as quickly as Makoto can make a grasping motion with a free hand. When thrown has the approximate speed of a bullet, and can hit targets no farther than 60 meters away provided it's accurately aimed. Owing to its simplicity, it's not very powerful nor very taxing, and can be cast while moving around or using other moves.
It's possible to upgrade this spell by charging for up to two seconds, the resulting bolt is comparatively slower, and has a range limited to 20 meters. This version is more damaging, as signified by a brighter glow, but it's also more tiring, forces the user to only move at a crawl, and prevents them from using other moves until the charging, which can't be externally interrupted, is complete. The increased electric charge is enough to immobilize a targeted limb, stopping its movement entirely for one second, after which movement returns to normal over the course of three seconds.[/spoiler]
Into this:
[spoiler]Zio: Revised - (Ranged Proficiency, Debuff Proficiency) - 600 OM
A yellow bolt of lightning two meters long and three centimeters in diameter, when thrown like a lance it discharges on contact, burning flesh (or equivalent) but can't stun. Can be loosed as quickly as Makoto can make a grasping motion with a free hand. When thrown has the approximate speed of a bullet, and can hit targets no farther than 60 meters away provided it's accurately aimed. Owing to its simplicity, it's not very powerful nor very taxing, and can be cast while moving around or using other moves.
It's possible to upgrade this spell by charging for up to five seconds, the resulting bolt is comparatively slower, and has a range limited to 20 meters. This version is more damaging, as signified by a brighter glow, but it's also more tiring, forces the user to only move at a crawl, and prevents them from using other moves until the charging, which can't be externally interrupted, is complete. The increased electric charge is enough to immobilize a targeted limb, stopping its movement entirely for double the time used to charge the move.[/spoiler]
I realize it's a big mechanical change which would probably require selling the old move and buying the new one, if it's even approved.
Sorry for all the trouble >_>