Joining: “Scratch” - General Automatics Mail-room Assistant model T551-C

[Dane Regan]

One fateful day (a Wednesday), the factory’s plumbing backed up and flooded the hallways and life support systems with organic waste. Overwhelmed with the amount of filth, Dent managed to reduce the entire orbital facility to a decompressed cinder. The resulting blaze triggered a catastraophic failure of an experimental gating technology, dropping both of them into a plane of existance they later discovered was called the Nexus. Fortunately, they have since been able to evade claims agents and litigants from Dewey, Sue & Howe however the resourcefulness of highly paid lawyers should never be underestimated. Referring to himself as a ‘protocol droid,’ he has garnered a good deal of nods and understanding, however Scratch is still unnerved by the occasional idiot moisture-farmer-nobody trying to tell him exactly how much ‘carbon scoring’ he’s got.

When did that become galactic business? Meat’splaining organics really are downright rude.

There's a couple of small problems here. Firstly, with this:
"The resulting blaze triggered a catastraophic failure of an experimental gating technology, dropping both of them into a plane of existance they later discovered was called the Nexus."
You can't 'go' to the Omniverse based on an outside action. Or make a portal there or whatever. Everyone comes here by the same way and gets the same intro, Omni grabbing them and chucking them in the Nexus (not literally). You could have a portal appear, and them get sucked through it, with the next thing they know they're face to face with Omni. But, the portal wouldn't have sent them there.

Also, I didn't realise you wanted to bring two characters here. You can't play as two people with one account (unless they're both the same entity - i.e. they share a body). (Although you could make one of the characters as an NPC later, they just wouldn't be your "main" character. If you're fine with one being a secondary instead of a prime, you can just start with them - although the secondary wouldn't have seen what Omni says).

Lastly, you can cut out the part of your backstory for stuff that happens after entering the OV. Roleplay it out after your app's approved.

MOVES:
Magnetic Shield: PolarityPosNeg.exe: (300 OM move), Requires Physical Strength
Internal coils generate a powerful magnetic field, shifting his own armored plating into a movable parabolic shield approximately 3 feet wide. Due to the readily available nature of materials (his own chassis), forming a shield is rather quick – within a second or two. Items like bullets or other small bits of metal debris may cling to the shield and magnetize.

Iron Storm:  PolarityPosNeg++.exe: (300 OM move) – Requires active Magnetic Shield, Requires Physical Strength, Requiers Area Attack Proficiency
Internal magnetic coils suddenly reverse, blasting all magnetized materials collected by the shield (including fragments of the shield itself) in a wall of shrapnel. The flight of these projectiles is directed in a wide ray, approximately three square feet in size. Because of a lack of aerodynamics, weight, and a tendency for shrapnel to collide with itself mid-flight, the danger of this attack degrades drastically outside of melee range (10 feet) from 350 fps to a measly 60 fps. The trigger is inefficient, so usage requires a half second delay.

SUPER
Self Destruct: GoodbyeCruelWorld.exe: (600 OM tier 1 super) – Requires Area Attack Proficiency, Disassemble, Hive Mind
Consider this a fully weaponized use of Disassemle. Executes a self-destruct application. Devastating within a 5 foot radius. Damage Type: Piercing/Explosive. Requires a countdown (one turn). Scratch blows himself apart, becoming a billowing cloud of heat, concussive force, and shrapnel. It may take a bit of effort (a few seconds of concerted focus) on his part to reassemble himself. Has a 16 character password to cancel out of. How about you try inputting that with an egg-beater for a hand. Once initiated, requires significant concentration to end the program before he detonates.

Magnetic Shield: Is the shield fixed to his body (so can does he carry it around)? Also, can he do anything while the shield is made, or does he need to concentrate to keep it up?

Iron Storm: This is pretty good. Add a small note at the bottom that this does basically no damage outside of 12ft range (since you'd need ranged prof to hit someone that far away). Also, are you sure you didn't mean "approximately 3ft in diameter" instead of "approximately three square feet in size"?

Self Destruct: Awesome. You could make the explosion a bit bigger if you wanted (up to 12ft radius, since you don't have ranged prof)