Official Move Approval IV

[Makoto Yuki]

Whoops, I should've checked the rest of the move before posting >_>

Zio: Revised - (Ranged Proficiency, Debuff Proficiency) - 600 OM

A yellow bolt of lightning two meters long and three centimeters in diameter, when thrown like a lance it discharges on contact, burning flesh (or equivalent) but can't stun. Can be loosed as quickly as Makoto can make a grasping motion with a free hand. When thrown has the approximate speed of a bullet, and can hit targets no farther than 60 meters away provided it's accurately aimed. Owing to its simplicity, it's not very powerful nor very taxing, and can be cast while moving around or using other moves.

It's possible to upgrade this spell by charging for up to five seconds, the resulting bolt is comparatively slower, and has a range limited to 20 meters. This version is more damaging, as signified by a brighter glow, but it's also more tiring, forces the user to only move at a crawl, and prevents them from using other moves until the charging is complete. Being attacked or restrained will cancel the charge and reset the needed time. The increased electric charge is enough to immobilize a targeted limb, stopping its movement entirely for double the time used to charge the move.

Will this work? And just so I'm sure we're on the same page, I do have to sell the old version for half price and then buy the new one, correct?

Thanks for your help!