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Official Move Approval IV
@ Cirno:

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(06-13-2017, 07:13 PM)Cirno Wrote: Snowball (300) (requires ranged proficiency, debuff proficiency)
Cirno will summon a stack of snowballs by her (they stay in battle until all five are used) to make all five it takes aproximatly five seconds to make five. The recharge is about ten seconds. the concentration is about half, and her energy consumption is fairly minor (like making a actual snowball). The snowballs are a couple inches in diameter. They don't really damage but they do cause the person who is hit to be slowed down by 5% (no matter how many is created 5% is the maximum debuff for this move) anyone can use said snowballs on anyone and the effect will apply. The snowballs move at the speed of 15 mph.

Ice aura (300) (requires area attack, ranged proficiency, debuff)
Cirno has a simple ice aura that will passively affect anyone that is within five feet of her. effects are shivering, frostbite (this is prolonged effects of being near her), etc. This aura will slow and damage the person (slowly I might add so a battle over three rounds might rack one or two damage with this move if there a melee fighter) This move has minimal concentration and energy consumption (like breathing easy). The debuff slows anyone down 4-5% while inside also but that slowing stops once someone has left the circle of effect. (this can be turned on and off at will.)

- What is the range of the snowball attack?

- Ice Aura would be 600 OM because it slows AND damages her opponents.[/spoiler]

@ Morene Fellon:

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(06-14-2017, 11:36 AM)Morene Fellon Wrote:
(06-14-2017, 06:53 AM)Jade Harley Wrote:
(06-14-2017, 12:24 AM)Morene Fellon Wrote: "Moonriser" Seismic Poleaxe - 900 OM (requires Physical Strength Proficiency, Homing Proficiency, and Burst Movement)
Needing something that fills the gap between crowd control and an initiator, Morene Fellon of Creedmoor one day found herself in the midst of the dark, swampy forests talking to demigodly beings who happened to control the forces of gravity that acted upon Teria, to cut the story short. Going to her residence, the huntress used her newfound powers granted to her by these seemingly divine creatures to infuse her self-forged poleaxe "Moonriser" with an almost magical gravitational pull.
The poleaxe itself stands at 7 feet tall from tip to pommel, weighing at about nine pounds when originally forged. Even with the rather large pommel acting as counterbalance, most men and women of average stature and strength to find this weapon a bit unwieldy. However, with Morene grasping it's handles, the weapon is one of her most effective.

Of course, Morene is able to use the poleaxe as a normal melee weapon of it's size, being able to strike with moderate speed and power, as any Prime would with a polearm of this quality, efficiently using it's axehead, hammerhead, spearhead, and even the pommel in any way deemed fitting for the situation. Of course, Omniphysics applies, so there won't be much of a difference in damage beyond placebo effect. (300 OM for this, used as a normal polearm.)

Naturally, it's gravitational qualities can make the weapon lighter or heavier, depending on what the woman desires in the specific situation. In that sense, Morene usually favors it's ability to pull it's hammerhead towards whatever she is choosing to strike; effectively 'charging' the weapon before attacking. With this, Morene can bait poorly timed defensive maneuvers with the slightly mesmerizing effects of gravity and a naturally slower attack. As a charged move, Morene can hold the poleaxe in her hands for 2 seconds before having to strike, though she can effectively feint the charge. (300 OM here, as a charged attack mechanic.)

However, Morene's favorite use of this gravity gimmick is it's ability to pull the nearly foot long spearhead into an opponent to catch up with them, in case there comes a situation whereas her opponent gets too slippery. Gaining a running start, Morene has to consistently sprint at full speed for 4 seconds before once again 'charging' her weapon with it's desired pulling effect. At will, she is able to launch herself forward at about a distance of 5 meters away in about 4 milliseconds, stabbing her opponent and causing potentially devastating piercing damage. However, if their opponent is reactive enough to dodge or properly defend themselves, Morene is completely open to attack as due result of her weapon's gravitational pull forcing her to miss and stagger. (300 OM for this, since it's an added homing dash attack, of sorts.)

You will need the homing proficiency for this! Also, please explain why you think this is 900 OM, just so I can be sure of what all this move does.

Edited! All underlined text is the stuff I added or clarified, by the way.

Okay, this looks great! Approved![/spoiler]

@ Cell:

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(06-14-2017, 01:25 PM)Cell Wrote:
Quote:Absorption(0)
By stabbing his tail into a downed target, Cell can literally drain their lifeforce to fuel his own growth. In the Omniverse, this is how he extracts Omnilium from Secondaries and how he will generally kill a defeated Prime.

updating to...

Quote:Absorption(0)
By stabbing his tail into a downed target, Cell can literally drain their lifeforce to fuel his own growth. Targets that Cell feels are particularly deserving, or will further his own evolution, are instead swallowed whole. The point on his tail opens up into a body-swallowing orifice, engulfing his foe and placing them whole within his body. In the Omniverse, this is how he extracts Omnilium from Secondaries and how he will generally kill a defeated Prime.

Good to go![/spoiler]

@ Tamsin Suzaku:

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(06-14-2017, 04:18 PM)Tamsin Suzaku Wrote:
Kamehameha
Tier 1 Super Attack - (600; requires Ranged Proficiency)

A technique devised by Muten Roshi, the master of the Kame-Sennin Ryu. In her own world, Tamsin was never able to fully master the use of ki-based energy attacks despite her extensive training. But the Omniverse had made it easier for her to execute such attacks, albeit at a significant toll.

Cusping her hands in front of her, Tamsin begins to channel energy, which appears as an ever-growing blue ball within her palms. After a few seconds, she unleashes a meter wide destructive wave. Flying at the speed of an arrow, the beam does continual damage in the area in front of her as long as it is maintained, though the intense drain it imposes on Tamsin only permits her to sustain it for a few seconds.

Approved!
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