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Official Move Approval IV
jade Wrote:@ Gildarts (bless you):
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(06-12-2017, 04:37 AM)Gildarts Wrote:
Struggle
-300 OM (debuff, ranged)

Gildarts releases a burst of energy from his palm and sparkling light dazzles his opponent hitting them square in the eyes. It flashes from his hand and when the opponent is caught looking at it he is stunned and blind for fifteen seconds. The magic fills the scene and expands, hitting the enemy most close to the Prime’s hand. Gildarts doesn’t need to be stationary to cast this move, but he does need to charge it for two seconds to conjure the magic with innate focus.

The move burns the opponent’s eyes for a moment and makes them lose their eyesight in the color of either black or white depending on the writer’s variables and opinions. It does no lasting damage other than stealing their eyesight away temporarily like a flash-grenade. They should be looking in Gildarts’ general direction for the move to land.

Fifteen seconds is a liiiiiittle long for a two second charge time. Either extend the charge time or reduce the period of reduced eyesight, please!
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Okayy! Also sorry for all the extra work. It is da crunch time not just for me but for you too! >.<

Is ten seconds okay?
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