06-10-2017, 09:50 PM
(06-10-2017, 06:12 AM)Little Ghost Wrote: Hallownest Charms: Longnail's Mark of Pride
Freely given by the Mantis Tribe to those they respect, this charm commemorates the very special task of besting their lances at their best
Cost: 300 OM
Requirements: Physical Strength Proficiency, The Pure Nail
A charm that Little Ghost found attached to his cloak, the Longnail's Mark of Pride is, like many other charms from Hallownest and its surroundings, a given gift. When held against your carapace, or other skin equivalent, it attaches and activates; increasing the range of your melee weapons up to a total reach of twelve feet. This is accomplished by the energy this charm provides your weapons. While in use, the charm causes the engravings of the Pure Nail to glow with a soothing pale white light. Using this charm causes each swing of the Nail to exert a bit more effort, it would be the equivalent of actually swinging a one-handed sword instead of the previous stamina drain, equivalent to simply swinging your own arm.
I'm going to deny this move because it looks like a blanket move that is just getting rid of the necessity for a variable option for your melee moves. If you want to extend the range of a melee move like this, then make it variable with a charge time and some downsides.