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Official Move Approval IV
(06-07-2017, 01:48 PM)VelKoz Wrote:
(06-07-2017, 10:18 AM)Mark Wrote: Without Enhanced Senses you'll need to put something in here about line-of-sight. You should also mention some form of fatigue and/or concentration since you're cutting the time down to less than 1/7th of the original time.

Learn Beam - Ranged, Insight (300):

Vel'Koz emits a bright beam of projected purple light that encompasses the person he is analysing up to a maximum range of 50 feet as long as he has vision of them, so that the projected light can hit them. This cuts the 30-second analysis time of Insight down to a mere 4 seconds, but makes it incredibly obvious that Vel'Koz is staring at the subject in question and he must remain still while doing so to complete the full scan.
After the scan is complete, he will have attained the regular information that Insight grants on his subject, followed by blinking a few times and producing a quip on the nature of the subject in question.
This move does no damage and will be interrupted if Vel'Koz is physically contacted by something, whether an attack or a tap on the carapace, as it requires concentration.
Due to Vel'Koz' eldritch nature, he intentionally ignores noise around him during the process, as screams can be distracting. To this point, he will not hear any speech or other sounds that occur during the scan.

Extra changes are in bold, hope it fits your criteria.

That's fine. Approved.
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