Official Move Approval IV

[Odin]

These are for my NPC, Freya when she gets approved.

Sword – 300 – Physical Proficiency
A sword crafted from dwarven steel hangs from a loop in Freya's belt. The nine-inch grip is wrapped in dark leather and leads to a guard depicting a naked male on one side and a naked female on the other. The blade itself is four feet long and sharp on both sides. At the base, it is two inches wide and evenly narrows to one inch wide about two inches to the end. It then quickly comes to a point in those last few inches. The fuller is lined with runes. It is an evenly balanced sword meant to be used one-handed.
 
Shield - 300 – Area Defense, Flight
Freya holds her hand out and creates a shield 10 feet in diameter that is centered on her hand. The shield is made of invisible force, is about as strong as a stone wall, and stops energy or matter from moving through it in either direction. Once summoned, which takes about a second, the shield cannot be moved. If her hand moves more than about an inch in any direction, the shield falls, otherwise, it lasts as long as it isn’t destroyed. Because only the one hand needs to remain stationary, her other hand can perform other tasks and her feet can move about a little. If summoned under her, it provides a platform that she and others can stand on.
 
Face of the Valkyrie – 600 – Utility Super Move Tier 1 – Debuff Proficiency
The target must be within 10 feet of her and maintain eye contact for at least 1 second. The target sees Freya’s face turn into their face in the throes of death. Then the image flies at them at the speed of a bullet. If it makes contact with them, they suffer the death curse for the next 5 minutes. Everything suddenly becomes deadlier. Ice cracks beneath their feet, dropping them into freezing water. The branches they are swinging from break leaving them falling to their death. A sword stabbed through their chest pierces their heart instead of missing the vitals. If running from a monster in a horror movie, they would slip and fall. Fate conspires to end their life. If they survive those five minutes, however, they are immune to the power forever. (Either killing or banishing a prime counts as killing them and means they are not immune in the future.)

Sword: Approved.

Shield: How thick is this shield? How draining is this on her stamina? Can more than one exist at a time? Can this be summoned while moving?

Face of the Valkyrie: This isn’t going to fly outside of maybe a personal story with your own NPCs and such. Inflicting straight-up death or something that leads indirectly to death isn’t something we’d allow unless it was pre-arranged between all players involved and whomever is judging it. Also, 5 minutes is much too long a duration for really any effect in a fight, even as a Super, since battles are sometimes shorter than 5 minutes. Something like a Debuff that causes their TEC stat to drop over a shorter duration and cause effects like slipping and falling would maybe pass if balanced correctly, but most of this is a no-go.

Shield - 300 – Area Defense, Flight
Freya holds her hand out and creates a shield 10 feet in diameter that is centered on her hand. The shield is made of invisible force about as strong as a stone wall, is three inches thick, and stops energy or matter from moving through it in either direction. Once summoned, which takes about a second, the shield cannot be moved. The shield can be summoned while she is moving, but if her hand moves more than about an inch in any direction (in space, not relative to her body), the shield falls, otherwise, it lasts as long as it isn’t destroyed. Because only the one hand needs to remain stationary, her other hand can perform other tasks and her feet can move about a little. If summoned under her, it provides a platform that she and others can stand on. No more than one shield can be summoned at a time. She can use the shield for about 30 seconds per battle, whether it is used continuously or in short bursts.



Face of the Valkyrie – 600 – Utility Super Move Tier 1 – Debuff Proficiency
The target must be within 10 feet of her and maintain eye contact for at least 1 second. The target sees Freya’s face turn into their face in the throes of death. Then the image flies at them at the speed of a bullet. If it makes contact with them, they suffer the death curse for one round. The effect is to lower their defense, therefore, make any wounds they suffer more serious than they would normally be.

Sidenote: I never meant for this to automatically kill anyone, the idea was just that anything that could go wrong for them would. I think it is simpler, and hopefully, more balanced now. Thanks!