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[Amaterasu]

"Wall" BYUK (Requires Area Shield?) - 300

After concentrating for three seconds, Ogong conjures the character for wall in mid-air. A brick wall will spread out from the center of Ogong's palm up to 3x3 meters. Once the wall forms it will detach from Ogong's hand and be affected by gravity. This wall is impenetrable to anyone with an ATK less than Ogong's. The wall can sustain itself as long as Ogong can focus on it - if he wants to cast another spell while maintaining the wall, the preparation takes twice as long. The moment Ogong sustains any damage, the wall will instantly break. This move has a cooldown of 20 seconds which begins as soon as the wall breaks. When the wall breaks, it shatters into tiny inconsequential pieces. This is the exception to the "no-two spells" rule.


"Stone" SUK (Requires Physical Strength, Ranged Attack) - 600
After concentrating for one second, Ogong conjures the character for stone in mid-air. A fairly spherical granite boulder with a radius of 35 cm will appear in Ogong's right palm. It's quite heavy, but Ogong's strength allows him to throw it, chuck it, smack or kick it towards a target. It will move at 20 m/s in an arc. Unlike most projectile-based Moves, the boulder will remain in the field even after it serves its function, meaning it can be thrown by anyone else who can lift the 500 kg boulder. No two spells can be cast at the same time.

These seem iffy. Help?

Let's see here...

"Wall" Byuk:
-The part about the wall being indestructible against people whose ATK is lower than Ogong's is no bueno. A shield move's defensive power is dependant on its size and on your character's stats, but "absolutes" like this one are not allowed - at least for regular moves.

-The wall can be "up to" 3x3 meters... does this mean that it can also be smaller? If so, you should note if the smaller wall has any advantages to compensate for protecting less than a big wall (faster cast time, more solid, less draining...) which would bump the cost up to 600. You could also say that a small wall is strictly weaker than a big wall, which would leave the cost at 300. But at that point you might as well remove the "up to" and make it so that the wall always has its max size

-Can Ogong move whilst sustaining the wall?

-How draining is it to cast and maintain the wall?

"Stone" SUK: 500kg is very heavy! You'd probably need upwards of 8 ATK to lift something of that weight, let alone throw it around (this is my personal assumption - I'm not sure if ATK directly translates to strength like that). I'm not sure if I am correct on this though - it may be better to ask someone more experienced with moves, in Move approval or through the Help Desk.