02-18-2018, 09:54 AM
Can you... extrapolate on your history? It's a bit on the short- and confusing side (at least for me). Like, that first sentence makes little sense to me. Who is Rafael? Some dude? Some cybertronian human? Who is Unicron?
You don't have any Alternate Forms or Shapechanging, but you keep making mention of alternate forms?
How long is the sword?
You'll likely need more drawbacks on the buff if you want it to seemingly have infinite duration based on location. You'll need to revist the drawbacks for the Debuff, as I'm quite certain that having a particular item out doesn't qualify as a drawback for the sakes of balancing moves.
You don't have any Alternate Forms or Shapechanging, but you keep making mention of alternate forms?
How long is the sword?
You'll likely need more drawbacks on the buff if you want it to seemingly have infinite duration based on location. You'll need to revist the drawbacks for the Debuff, as I'm quite certain that having a particular item out doesn't qualify as a drawback for the sakes of balancing moves.