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Official Move Approval IV
@ Dawnika Snow:
[spoiler]
Quote:Fist of the Fallen
Tier Two Super Attack(800)
Requires: Physical Strength, Steel Gauntlets


Imbued with rage for her fallen allies, Erika/Dawn puts all her physical strength into a single massive strike that is strong enough to shatter steel into pieces. The girl winds up a haymaker punch, taking about three seconds to gain some focused power(which can be signified by her arm gaining an aura of red, pulsating light) and charges her enemy, aiming to bludgeon her foe with a single attack of massive power. Once this attack is made, successful or not, it renders the Steel Gauntlet attack useless for about ten seconds while they repair themselves with the Omnilium infused in Erika/Dawn’s glove.

When did the Steel Gauntlet come into this..? What does this attack look like, how long does it take for her to charge it up before unleashing?

Reply: The steel Gauntlets are required for the attack, When used, they break from the massive exertion of force, which they then repair themselves with Omnilium and can't be used for some time. This is pretty much just a fodder thing for me.

Quote:Demonic Lineage
Tier One Power-Up(1000)
1/2/2/0

This power up can be used by both Erika and Dawn. The dramatic scene with the Demon Kage imprinting her soul onto Dawn’s body created a special demon-born illness inside of her. She now is a half demon and draws upon her demonic powers for short time. She, however, cannot use any guns when this form is active. The only differences one can note this with is a change to eye color(red) and hair color(silver)

Does this power-up result in any physical alterations? If not, that's cool, it's still approved.

Quote:Demonic Power
Complex Move(600)
Requires: Ranged Prof., Area Attack, Demonic Lineage

A black beam with a two-foot radius shot of pure energy released from the palm of the girls’ hands. This move is only useable when Demonic Lineage is active. With no charge, this beam only takes a second to release. If she decides to charge it, it can be charged up to three seconds in which the beam's power is amplified by double, but even so the power of the uncharged beam is relatively weak. In either case, she must stand still while charging and releasing this attack. Using the uncharged version isn't very tiring, but the charged version can wear out the half demon if used in succession too offen.


This needs a drawback. Is it a very fatiguing move? Must she aim it? Must she remain stationary while aiming it? Also, it would be a good idea to note that the "no charge" mode of the move is super weak while the three second charge is stronger.[/spoiler]

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Messages In This Thread
Official Move Approval IV - by Omni - 07-13-2015, 02:17 PM
Official Move Approval IV - by Omni - 08-30-2015, 06:24 PM
Moves PSA - by Omni - 10-30-2015, 05:59 PM

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