Move Creation Workshop

[Amaterasu]

Note that all modes under this form (the exception is yellow mode) have the same activation time. There is no duel wielding with dual knives move. Note the color mode is what the knife shows before using it. I also plan on condensing all the real knife moves into one.

Yellow mode (real knife) (homing proficiency, ranged materialize proficiency, ranged proficiency) (300)
The real knife is the same as the other forms except that it is a yellow blade. It will fire at the fastest rate of any real knife variation at a rather large lack of real power. the time it takes to activate this form is five seconds, it is like a machine gun for rate of fire. The concentration is fair and the energy is minimum also to be used. There is no limit to the "Ammo" (though its real use is to trip people up). This has a max length of about fifty feet diameter but the attack is not effective at all at that range (best range of effect is around twenty five feet or so after that it gets fairly unreliable in terms of attack and being able to hit the target)

Cyan mode (real knife) (Physical strength and ranged proficiency's, Ranged materialize, remote control) (600)
This mode is like the rest except its ability's to grab onto people and the rip limbs and stuff off. This is one of the strongest forms in terms of strength but it is also one of the most taxing with concentration and energy. the max length is twelve feet. The cyan grab needs as much or more Atk to break free with little trouble.

Orange mode (real knife) (300) (requires ranged proficiency)
Orange mode is like red mode in all ways except being able to change direction at will. nothing special except that each change in direction lessens the impact by ten percent of the original atk. Concentration and exhaustion increases with orange slash released (max is four but the max distance is fifteen feet.

Dark blue (real knife) (300) (requires melee proficiency)
This mode is special in that it changes the knifes length to any length up to ten feet. The blade the closer it is to the actual blade the faster it moves. (takes about five seconds for the ten foot blade to completely hit the ground and half the time half way. The durability of the blade is fairly hard to break. but the exhaustion for any length above six feet even is heavy due to the weight of the blade has increased dramatically.

Purple mode (real knife) (300) (requires ranged proficiency, area attack proficiency)
This makes three slashes like red mode except that the first slash acts like a buffer against moves allowing the other two to go in and explode. It can not change direction and is fairly taxing and concentration is medium. The explosion radius is about three to four feet
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My special hell (tier three super offensive) (1000) (requires area attack proficiency, teleportation, ranged proficiency, ranged materialize proficiency)

Chara's trump card in offensive attacks. the attack has a diameter of fifty feet by fifty feet think a can (closer to the center the more  damage it deals) She will stab the ground charging her red mode this causes the ground around her to grow red. Then after twenty seconds after the knife has been stabbed into the ground. burning death will quickly go to one hundred feet in height for five to ten seconds before it dissipates. This causes great exhaustion in Chara and this will cause things to be disintegrated (not primes of course, but trees, rocks, buildings, civilians all will be gone (like a atom bomb).

Glitch (tier one super defense) (600) (requires teleportation)
Chara will glitch out of the way of any tier one super offensive. that is all there is to it.

My Special Hell: You should wait with considering T3 Super Moves until you are coming close to the level required to purchase them. I'm skipping a review of it in favor of your other moves, unless you want to reduce it to a T1/T2 Super Move.

As a rule of thumb for your other moves, try to write them as if you were explaining them to someone who has never heard of them and who's trying to picture them. You'll need to be specific, even if the move description becomes very long.

Yellow Mode (Real knife):
-"like a machine gun for rate of fire" is a little too unspecific, as machineguns can vary a lot from model to model.
-"The concentration is fair and the energy is minimum also to be used." Be specific How does Chara need to concentrate? Can she not move or use other moves as a result? And how much stamina does it cost?
-"This has a max length of about fifty feet diameter", this would be a pretty huge projectile. Or did you mean that 50ft is the maximum range that it can reach? In which case we'd need to know what the projectile looks like.
-Why are the ranged materialize and homing proficiencies in the requirements? I see no mention of either in the description.
-You should also explain how the knife fires. Does Chara point it? Does she slash with it like for other Real Knife moves?

Cyan mode:
-If I understand correctly this is a lasso/rope type of move, since it can grab onto people? I can't quite picture this.
-"ability's to grab onto people and the rip limbs and stuff off", note that ripping a limb off would be VERY high damage that you can't do with just any attack. To tug at an opponent is one thing, to tear something off is another.
-Why are the ranged materialize and homing proficiencies in the requirements?
-How does Chara need to concentrate? Can she not move or use other moves as a result? What is the stamina cost?

Orange mode:
-Again, stamina cost and how long it takes and how much focus to use it (and to redirect the attack).
-What does the 4 maximum mean? Can four slashes be in the air at the same time?
-This would require the remote control proficiency.

Dark blue:
If I understand correctly, Chara can make the knife's size up to 10ft, but the bigger it is the slower it moves and the more exhausting it is to wield?
-I would try revising the move's description as it's a little bit confusing.
-What is the 5 second "to hit the ground"? Is that the amount of time it takes to lengthen the blade to its maximum size?
-How exhausting is the move to use?
-How long does it take to shrink the knife again?
-Can it be used alongside other moves?

Purple mode:


(WIP! Will edit everything else in soon)