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Move Creation Workshop
(05-16-2017, 11:09 AM)Amaterasu Wrote:
(05-16-2017, 10:56 AM)EssentĀ RoseĀ Allison Wrote: Whipfist (Physical Strength, Ranged) (600? OM)

Essent turns a whole limb into a massing claw-like tentacle which she can extend the more focus she uses. She must be standing still to use this move. The longer she makes it, the more focus it takes. It requires aiming manually before launch.

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Is Essent an eldritch abomination in disguise or something? :frog: Anycase! The base for the move is good, but you need to be specific.

-What are the dimensions of the arm's "non-changing" sizes, like its claws?
-Is it a "shot" attack, as in that Essent stabs her claw-like tentacle and retracts it immediately after? Or does she swing it around like a whip? I presume it's that latter one judging from the name of the move.
-How far can it extend at maximum?
-In regards of the focus, how long must she focus to extend the whip to its maximum range? Is there a minimum amount of time that she has to focus?
-Turning her limb into a tentacle: does that require any time to transform? Is it done almost instantly?
-How tiring is it to use this move?
-Is the tentacle limb a part of her body that can be injured, or would it be like a weapon that can be broken without harming the user? If it's a part of her body, it would require Stretchability or Malleability to use along with the proficiencies that you have.

I just edited the post, it should include more detail.
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