05-08-2017, 04:16 PM
Link to topic: A Rough Return to the Waking World
Total character count including spaces: 34,650
Total word count: 5760
FOR PERSONAL STORYLINES: Great
Comment: Kelly is killin' it as always. Such intricate prose is nigh impossible to match. It's amazing that he can take 5000 words, slam them together and make it all about waking up. Every word is b-e-autifully designed. I also loved how much he built up his scenerio into Dark Data. Having built that up makes me wanna read his Dark Data stuff if I can find the time. You're doing awesome yo, but I'm still goin' for Ghidorah's neck boi.
Total character count including spaces: 34,650
Total word count: 5760
FOR PERSONAL STORYLINES: Great
Comment: Kelly is killin' it as always. Such intricate prose is nigh impossible to match. It's amazing that he can take 5000 words, slam them together and make it all about waking up. Every word is b-e-autifully designed. I also loved how much he built up his scenerio into Dark Data. Having built that up makes me wanna read his Dark Data stuff if I can find the time. You're doing awesome yo, but I'm still goin' for Ghidorah's neck boi.
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