Move Creation Workshop

[Amaterasu]

Brass Knuckles - 300 OM - Physical Strength, Debuff Proficiency:

Brass Knuckles are a set of stereotypical brass knuckles made out of a dark blue metal. They can be worn on either hand and allow him to punch harder than he otherwise would, meaning that his punches do a fair amount of damage. These take about three seconds for him to materialize and three more seconds for him to put on. The knuckles also have another property in that they have a chance to give a concussion that could last about seven seconds to anyone they hit. Ten seconds is the amount of cool down this move requires.

Dark Card - Shock Bolt (RP Flavor, Ranged Proficiency, Ranged Materialize Proficiency, Remote Control Proficiency, Debuff Proficiency, 300 OM.)

The Dark Card Shock Bolt is a prototype weapon that when held up will cause a single cloud of dark blue energy to appear above Veritas and his opponent(s) on the battlefield. This discharges a bolt of Lightning that has the equivalent power to a Tazer. Other moves can be employed so long as he has one hand free to use this move. If they require both hands this move is canceled. The move is mildly draining on his stamina levels, akin to a medium workout. The lightning bolt causes the opponent to suffer muscle spasms when they hit, making it take twice as long to summon attacks that require weapons to be held in their hands for 15 seconds.  Has a cool down of twenty seconds. /

Brass Knuckles: You'd need to explain what this concussion does, how it affects whoever is hit by it. And I'd advise re-reading the Balancing moves part of the rules because of the cooldown - it's not really a big disadvantage. Finally, how tiring would the move be, and can it be used alongside other moves?

Dark Card - Shock Bolt:
-How is it "RP Flavor" if it has a cost associated to it?
-I think that Remote Control is not necessary for this move since it only fires one bolt and isn't really controlled, but I'm not certain.
-The weapon itself is not described.
-How long does it take to conjure the cloud?
-How fast the lightning bolt moves (if it's lightning-fast you might need Homing Proficiency since it would auto-hit)?
-Does it deal any damage besides the debuff?
-"A medium workout" is not specific enough, as that can be understood very broadly. Perhaps try putting it in numbers? Like "drains half of his total stamina" or some such?
-The debuff time is a bit powerful IMO, since effectively Veritas could be casting it again on an opponent with just 5 seconds of downtime between two casts. Consider giving it a shorter duration or a longer cooldown, maybe?