05-03-2017, 03:55 PM
I have lost count of the years since I've rped in world ala Chubbs dbz rpg. So I am very rusty, and I realize I need some feedback(and likely need to get back to basics).
Unfortunately right now I'm in the middle of planning a wedding and trying not to let work run me off; so when I have downtime after I get home I(at least for the past few days) I've rushed to my pc and written things off the top of my head.
So anyway, open to being critiqued here or via inbox or discord. Don't read too much, your eyes will start to bleed.
http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=7949
Unfortunately right now I'm in the middle of planning a wedding and trying not to let work run me off; so when I have downtime after I get home I(at least for the past few days) I've rushed to my pc and written things off the top of my head.
So anyway, open to being critiqued here or via inbox or discord. Don't read too much, your eyes will start to bleed.
http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?tid=7949