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Official Move Approval IV
(04-26-2017, 12:13 PM)Warren Zimmer Wrote: Multi-Weapon Construct Apparatus MK I: (2100, Physical Strength,  Ranged Proficiency.)
The Multi-Weapon Construct Apparatus MK I is based loosely off of Dataverse designs of the Sinestro Corps Ring. While it does manipulate hard-light energy it doesn't do so channeling the power of the Emotional Spectrum. The constructs it makes are limited to hand held things, and currently, only a few defaults have been installed as capabilities of the device. This also has his communicator and mobile data verse device integrated into it. Unlike his devices, this is one that Warren has built for himself.

The first construct is an elegant purple and black Calvary sword that has golden trim. This sword can be used for melee combat and is a simple construct with no special properties, and is an ordinary sword. This takes two seconds to summon.

The second construct granted by the Multi-Weapon Construct Apparatus is a set of hooked swords. These can be used defensively to parry attacks that are directed by crossing them together. They can also be used to travel along zip lines, but their primary use is to cut an enemy down to size. Despite being constructs they are ordinary blades with no special properties. This takes five seconds to summon both.

The third form of the Multi-Weapon Construct Apparatus's construct is an assault rifle with 30 shots, and that can be refilled every seven seconds. This has a range of 45 meters. It's shots appear to be shaped like tennis balls of energy. It does a good amount of damage and takes about seven seconds to summon.

The fourth of the constructs is a circular shield, but with wicked blades on the edges of the shield. This can be used offensively by being hurled at an enemy to cut them up or by being used as a 'chainsaw' when a button inside it is pushed to cut down multiple enemies with the blades on the shield. This is one that Warren doesn't like to use all that much, as it takes him 3 seconds to summon.

The fifth and final form of the Multi-Weapon Construct Apparatus's constructs is a simple gun. Well if you call a gun that fires missiles, bullets and lasers at an opponent at a rate of seven shots per second from each simple. This is very accurate and does high damage. Of the weapons he has this is the one that takes the longest time to summon, namely ten seconds. The weapon could be charged up however and if that is done it could do even more damage to anyone on the receiving end.

"The Multi-Weapon Construct Apparatus MK I is based loosely off of Dataverse designs of the Sinestro Corps Ring." The problem with this is that there wouldn't be anything of the sort on the Dataverse and, if there had been, I would have assumed that Sinestro would have tried to get them taken off.

First construct - What are it's dimensions?

Second Construct - What are the dimensions of these blades?

Third Construct - Please provide a description of the weapon. Does it have multiple firing modes? Is there a reload time? What is it's default firing mode?

Fourth Construct - How big is the shield? What does the shield look like?

Fifth Construct - What does this gun look like? Does it shoot these projectiles all at once or can you switch between them?

The Move in General - How does using this move affect his stamina?

(04-27-2017, 02:56 PM)Undyne Wrote: Anime-sized Sword Taitan (300, requires Physical Strength)

Visual Reference:
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Like every good anime hero, Undyne needs a sword, and it must be historically accurate (aka corresponding to anime tropes)! Which is to say, at least as big as its wielder, preferably larger. Undyne's train of thought? "Go big or go home." As a result, her anime-sized sword is two and a half times as long as herself. She would have gone for twice as long if the sword didn't become overly unwieldy as a result.

The weapon that Undyne named "Taitan" (meaning "Titan" and pronounced the same way) is a true anime-sized sword with a straight blade of 3,90m plus a hilt of 35cm, for a total length of 4,25m. The handle has a basic guard to protect the wielder's hands and offers good grip, which is more than necessary considering the unwieldiness of it. A flame pattern on the hilt provides some simple decoration, but the blade itself is blank, massive steel. While its exact weight is unknown, considering that its blade is pure steel as thick as ~5cm at the center, one can guess that it's heavy as hell.
The size and weight translates into a weapon that wields like a steel beam - in other words, atrociously. It relies on momentum and going with the 'flow' over swift fencing-style combat. Undyne always needs a little time to swing it, making it a very predictable weapon, which is one of its three weaknesses. The second is that it's very tiring to use: five or six swings would leave Undyne breathing heavily. The third is that it must be used with both hands for anything besides carrying it (Undyne can do that with one hand), thus keeping Undyne from wielding it in conjunction with other moves that require her hands.
Its strengths are a great attack range, rivaling that of spears and staff weapons, and its weight. While of course it can be blocked or deflected, its momentum carries into the force of the attack.
Taitan can be used for stabbing and slashing, though considering its dimensions, stabbing is unlikely to ever be practical.
Undyne can make it appear into her hand or draw it out of a sheath that's far too small on the outside, for added anime effect. Either method takes ~3 seconds before the sword is drawn and usable.


I'm not sure if this move would also require Ranged Proficiency and/or Area attack? Please advise Big Grin


Also, the following Power-Up please:

Undyne the Undying (T1 Power-Up - 1000)
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"You're gonna have to try a little harder than that."
Originally Undyne's resolve to stop the rampaging human from destroying the entire world, her Undying form activated as her Determination kept her from death and reformed her. Now in the Omniverse, she is able to activate it at will, but needs an enormous amount of energy to keep that very Determination from destroying her.
If she transforms, those who made her do it should fear for their lives: it is the point where Undyne ends the time for talk and sets every bit of her mind on striking down her opponent.
Along with the radical changes to her appearance and armor, a bright light shines from her left eye and her voice sounds as if two people spoke at the same time.
Note: If Undyne is in her non-armored form, she does not gain armor upon transformation. Only her body's appearance shifts.

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Taitan - Since the sword's reach is about 14ft this will require ranged prof. As for area attack, unless the weapon is larger than 3ft in diameter, I doubt you'll need it. Other than that, It is approved (just make sure to add ranged prof to the requirements). 

Transformation - Approved


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