04-20-2017, 10:07 AM
(04-19-2017, 08:14 PM)Warren Zimmer Wrote:Wild Car (???)
The Wild Car is a vehicle that was in existence back home in Warren's original world. This car is gray, with black and purple trim. On the side of it to the right, there is a W engraved in bright purple. The Wild Car is armed with missile launchers, and can also tap into all of Warren's energy based moves. Furthermore it has a set of mini machine guns built into it.
Not sure what else to put for this move. Any suggestions?
You're going to need to describe the car itself a bit better - its dimensions and such, and how you plan to use it. Will it be a Power-up (for instance, giving Warren additional defense?), an Assist, a move? The way it is sounds like you want to make it an Assist, in which case all the moves that you don't have but you want the car to have will also need approval.
(04-19-2017, 08:34 PM)Marcus Wright Wrote: 300 OM, Physical Proficiency, Ranged Proficiency-
Desert Eagle Mark XIX .50 AE
Magazine Size: 7 per round
Effective Range: 200 meters
Rate of Fire: 20 - 30 rpm or 1 shot per second
This gun is a gas gun that is self-loading. Blair requires both hands on the gun to use it. As the gun is being used, it takes a few seconds to load it and then shoot it. This gun has Great fire accuracy and long range of effective fire. The drawback to the gun is that has high recoil and not good in night time.
300 OM Physical Proficiency, Ranged Proficiency - -LAR Grizzly Mark 1 .45 Win Mag.-
LAR Grizzly Mark 1
Magazine Size: 7 per round
Effective Range: 200 meters
Rate of Fire: 20 - 30 rpm or 1 shot per second
The most powerful gun ever created, but it has a high recoil. Its speed is useable but the recoil can be dangerous at times and creates a large “BOOM!” in Blair's hand.
Desert Eagle: How damaging is this, roughly?
Grizzly: Can this be used with other moves or does the recoil make that impossible? How long does this take to reload?
For both: How fast does each variety of projectile move? How many clips of ammo does she keep on her for each at one time, and can more be summoned in combat? If so, please state how long the process of summoning more takes.
(Trying to get these guns right, but doing research on some of these guns aren't helping me any on these two. Any ideas how to improve the wording on these guns?
Magazine size is 7 per round? :frog: 7 shots per magazine, you mean? Also, how long does it take to reload? Well, Warren noted this rather well. Otherwise, remember to give numbers or some other accurate form of measurements or one that everyone can understand rather than "great range" or "high recoil". Similarly, the "night time" thing is fluff, you can just leave it out if you like.
Other than that, the questions mentioned at the bottom pretty much cover it, I would say... I don't know much about guns so I can't give you realistic numbers.
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