04-07-2017, 10:24 AM
@Warren Zimmer:
It was a good effort, but you have failed this quest. While your word count was above the minimum requirement, you did not follow the guidelines of the quest.
1. The location was supposed to be Dalaran, not a random temple in the woods.
2. Warren did not ask for knowledge because he was a Prime seeking to help the Kingdom.
3. He did not have a clearly defined Master who was a senior practicioner at Dalaran, and stabbing a sorceress through the chest (even if she was not actually slain) is never a good idea, especially if you're seeking to get on their good side.
4. You mentioned a Mages' Institute, but not the Mages' Guild. This is only a minor mistake, but it seems to suggest that you did not read the quest description carefully.
Thank you for your patience!
Quote:The Sorcerer’s Apprentice
Location: Dalaran, Camelot
For those with magical potential, there are many avenues of progression in the wonderland known as Dalaran. If you prostrate yourself before the council as a Prime seeking to help the Kingdom, you may be lucky enough to be assigned a Master, one of the senior practitioners of Dalaran. The Master in question will depend on your particular gifts or personality. As an apprentice, your day-to-day life may involve intense, harsh schooling, running strange errands, or partaking in even more unusual training activities. If you can prove yourself able to adapt and learn, you will earn both the respect of the High Council and the attention of the Kingdom. As an official part of the Mages' Guild, you will also be able to take on your own apprentices and have a say in city affairs.
It was a good effort, but you have failed this quest. While your word count was above the minimum requirement, you did not follow the guidelines of the quest.
1. The location was supposed to be Dalaran, not a random temple in the woods.
2. Warren did not ask for knowledge because he was a Prime seeking to help the Kingdom.
3. He did not have a clearly defined Master who was a senior practicioner at Dalaran, and stabbing a sorceress through the chest (even if she was not actually slain) is never a good idea, especially if you're seeking to get on their good side.
4. You mentioned a Mages' Institute, but not the Mages' Guild. This is only a minor mistake, but it seems to suggest that you did not read the quest description carefully.
Thank you for your patience!
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