03-14-2017, 04:14 PM
(03-14-2017, 01:01 AM)Daniel Wrote: Physical Description - It says originals only, but it's common courtesy to provide, at least, a picture of your character. People aren't going to want to google search stuff about your character when they write with you, they will just want to look in your profile.Fixed
Proficiencies - it's not Prophecy, it's proficiency. I got what you meant, just thought you would want to change that xD
Energy Blasts - How fast do these projectiles travel? Saying that the range varies is too vague, how far can these go? a two minute charge time, for a move that I'm guessing he will depend on semi regularly, seems a bit too unforgiving.
Lightning Bolts - How long does it take him to create these lightning bolts? How fast do they travel? What is his use limit? Again, saying that the range is 'short range' isn't specific enough, how far can these projectiles travel?
Inferno - What is the charge time?
Instant Energy Shield - Please describe this more. What it looks like, charge time, duration etc.


