03-10-2017, 04:51 AM
(03-06-2017, 06:22 AM)Makoto Yuki Wrote: The idea was that it just packed a bigger punch, like switching to a higher caliber weapon. But now that you mention it, I can definitely see myself picking up debuff later on and getting back here to add a stun effect, so I'll just skip all that and do it now.
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Zio: Revised - (Ranged Proficiency, Debuff Proficiency) - 600 OM
A yellow bolt of lightning two meters long and three centimeters in diameter, when thrown like a lance it discharges on contact, burning flesh (or equivalent) but can't stun. Can be loosed as quickly as Makoto can make a grasping motion with a free hand. When thrown has the approximate speed of a bullet, and can hit targets no farther than 60 meters away provided it's accurately aimed. Owing to its simplicity, it's not very powerful nor very taxing, and can be cast while moving around or using other moves.
It's possible to upgrade this spell by charging for up to two seconds, the resulting bolt is comparatively slower, and has a range limited to 20 meters. This version is more damaging, as signified by a brighter glow, but it's also more tiring, forces the user to only move at a crawl, and prevents them from using other moves until the charging, which can't be externally interrupted, is complete. The increased electric charge is enough to immobilize a targeted limb, stopping its movement entirely for one second, after which movement returns to normal over the course of three seconds.
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How does this look?
Bump.