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Official Move Approval IV
(02-26-2017, 08:00 PM)Jak Mar Wrote: Mass Inverter (300) (Requires Physical Proficiency, Ranged Proficiency)

This weapon is quite unique as Jak can shoot one rectangle anti-gravity field around an enemy for  short time. The enemy will float up in the air in a anti-gravity field until a minute is over. While the enemy is stuck in anti-grav field, Jak can shoot other guns in conjunction with this attack.
It will however not hurt the enemy unless it’s a one kill situation. The rate of fire on this gun is low but the range of the attack is in the short to medium range of Jak.

How long does it take to ready the shot and fire? How fast does the projectile move? Can you describe the rate of fire more precisely; like, how many seconds between shots? Can you describe the range in numbers? How long does it take and how draining is it for Jak to summon up more ammo for this? When enemies are caught in this are they able to attack at all or are they immobile and unable to do anything? When you say ‘one kill situation’, what do you mean? You’ll never be able to kill an opponent in a single hit so I’m unsure what you mean here. Can this be fired while moving and does this require concentration or is it fire-and-forget? Can it be used with other non-gun moves?

(02-26-2017, 08:06 PM)Jak Mar Wrote: Tier 2 Super- Light Regeneration(Requires Healing, Light Jak) 300 OM- Light Jak is able to heal himself and allies when getting some form of attack.Jak can heal each wound caused on the body. Allies must be a close distance to Light Jak to be speed their healing. The healing occurs at the level of Advanced Regeneration.  SP is required for Jak to every time he uses to heal. (I'm going to put this as a super move then.

You’ll need to change the wording a bit here since ‘can heal each wound on the body’ sounds like it gives a full heal rather than a few points. You’ll also need to specify how many targets this can hit and for how much as well. Keep in mind that healing with SP for Jak himself wouldn’t need a Super Move, but if the move targeted himself and 2 others for 1 point each, you could do that (the Healing rules describe this in detail). Also the part about ‘at the rate of advanced generation’ isn’t really needed since when you use SP to heal it’s considered instant in the rules. If you want to RP it as taking a few seconds that’s fine, but just letting you know.
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