03-05-2017, 04:02 AM
(03-04-2017, 09:18 PM)Jade Harley Wrote: Makoto Yuki
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(02-23-2017, 04:33 PM)Makoto Yuki Wrote: Zio: Revised - Ranged Proficiency - 600 OM
A yellow bolt of lightning, two meters long and three centimeters in diameter, thrown like a lance. Can be loosed as quickly as Makoto can make a grasping motion with a free hand. When thrown has the approximate speed of a bullet and a max range of 60 meters. Not very tiring but not particularly powerful, it's best used to soften up or otherwise harass an opponent.
It's possible to concentrate more fully on casting this spell however, by charging for up to two seconds, the resulting bolt is comparatively slower, and has a range limited to 20 meters. This version of the spell is much more strenuous, to account for the heavier firepower.
What are the effects of getting hit with one of these bolts? Do they electrically shock an opponent, or stun them for a limited amount of time-- note; this would need the debuff proficiency? Can the caster's concentration when charging up the move be broken? Must the caster remain stationary or can they move around while performing this move? Can Yuki perform other moves while using this move? Is it difficult to aim/must it be aimed at all?
Does this range, "Is incredibly accurate up to 15 meters, becoming unreliable and gradually fizzling out until it dissappears completely at 20 meters," still apply to the weaker version of the move?[/spoiler]
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Zio: Revised - Ranged Proficiency - 600 OM
A yellow bolt of lightning two meters long and three centimeters in diameter, when thrown like a lance it discharges on contact, burning flesh (or equivalent) but can't stun. Can be loosed as quickly as Makoto can make a grasping motion with a free hand. When thrown has the approximate speed of a bullet, and can hit targets no farther than 60 meters away provided it's accurately aimed. Owing to its simplicity, it's not very powerful nor very taxing, and can be cast while moving around or using other moves.
It's possible to upgrade this spell by charging for up to two seconds, the resulting bolt is comparatively slower, and has a range limited to 20 meters. While more powerful, this version is also more tiring, forces the user to only move at a crawl, and prevents them from using other moves until the charging, which can't be externally interrupted, is complete
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