Official Move Approval IV

[Jade Harley]

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A handful of moves for an NPC Prime! The first one is a modified version of the M16 from the sample page, and the rest are changes to ones already cleared for Abner, because whatever it's moves on an NPC Prime. Since they got shaken up so much I might have unbalanced them, here they all are!

M16 Assault Rifle (requires Ranged Proficiency) – 300 OM
A fully automatic weapon which can be used while moving. It fires two rounds per second. It has a magazine size of 20 rounds and takes two seconds to change out the clip. Clay can carry up to twelve magazines on his person (scattered across his various tactical pouches) - he can replenish these when he has enough time to summon more between fights. Clay stores this on his back, so it can be grabbed on the fly, provided it doesn’t get tangled up with the shotgun he also keeps across his back. The bullets themselves do little damage, it is accurate up to 350 yards. The weapon is capable of more, but Clay lacks the training to utilize it to its full potential. Clay is not skilled enough to use this weapon in conjunction with any of his other weapons.

Sig Sauer P226 - Requires Ranged Proficiency (300) - A fairly standard, black pistol that Clay keeps in a thigh holster on his right side. It takes him about two seconds to draw it from the holster. The pistol holds fifteen rounds in the magazine, plus one that he always keeps in the chamber. When empty, if he has a fresh mag on his person (he carries two on his belt and two on his vest for a total of four spares), it takes him about four seconds to reload the weapon. Reloading takes all of his focus, and he is susceptible to being caught off guard while doing so. Clay can accurately shoot up to 10 yards in a hurry and on the move, and around 25 with a little more aim and concentration. It fires .40 S&W rounds, allowing him to be accurate and have solid stopping power at the same time. It is semi-automatic, so it will fire just as fast as he can pull the trigger. Clay is not skilled enough to use this weapon in conjunction with any of his other weapons.

Remington 870 – Requires Ranged Proficiency (300) - A standard, black twelve gauge shotgun. Clay typically keeps this slung over his back, which takes him about six seconds to get it into his hands and ready to fire, or more if it gets tangled in his other equipment. The shotgun has four shells of buckshot in the magazine tube and an empty chamber while he's traveling, plus an additional six rounds stored on the side of the gun for quick access. Between every shot he must pump the slide to load a new shell into the chamber. Though he can pump almost instantly after firing, loading the additional shells on the side into the barrel directly after depleting the magazine can take as much as five seconds to load and fire, slowing down his last shots considerably. Any additional ammo has to be summoned with Omnilium the old fashioned way. The maximum range of the weapon is around 35 yards. Though up close it has devastating stopping power, the further away he gets, the less damage it does due to less pellets actually hitting the target. Clay is not skilled enough to use this weapon in conjunction with any of his other weapons.

Combat Knife - Requires Physical Strength (300) 
A solid, heavy steel combat knife that Clay wears on the left shoulder strap of his bulletproof vest. It has a blade length of 7 inches, and an overall length of 12 when including the grip. The weapon hangs with the handle towards the ground, so he can draw it in a fluid downward motion with a great deal of speed. Though it is a remarkably sturdy weapon, Clay sacrifices power for speed and handling ability with this weapon. Clay is not skilled enough to use this weapon in conjunction with any of his other weapons.

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Looks good to me! All approved!

In preparation of my purchases log, here's a handful of moves I'd like, please and thank you :frog:

Blade of Kusanagi (300, Physical Strength)
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The Blade of Kusanagi, also known as Kusanagi no Tsurugi, is one of the Three Imperial Regalia of Japan, and arguably the one with the greatest offensive power. It has about the size of a european longsword (the blade is 1,10m long, the hilt is about 30cm long, for a total of 1,40m), and is made entirely of highly durable Jade, thus is able to go toe-to-toe with regular weapons. It has a peculiar design in that the hilt and the blade are not visibly connected but are instead held together with invisible magic. This cosmetic effect, as well as the strands of silk that pass through the center of the sword, have no bearing on the sword's behavior.

The sword is summoned almost instantly along with its sheath, appearing on Amaterasu's waist or back where it can be drawn, or on her back with no sheath if she is in wolf form. Similarly it can be made to vanish near-instantly. It's wielded either by holding it with both hands or, when Amaterasu is in wolf form, by thrusting her body forward and to the sides, upon which the blade does a corresponding stab or slash motion because she cannot wield the sword with her paws. Because of the concentration it requires to be wielded, it cannot be used simultaneously to other moves.

Thanks to its relatively high mass the sword has the dynamics of a claymore - it packs a big punch but is somewhat unwieldy and relies on momentum over swift strikes. Carrying it doesn't tire Amaterasu much but fighting for prolonged times (more than a minute or two) eventually wears her out.
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Mirror Reflector (600, Physical Strength, Area Shield Proficiency) <== I think I may not actually need Area Shield for this one?)
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The Mirror Reflector, also known as Yata no Kagami, is one of the Three Imperial Regalia of Japan, and the one with the greatest defensive power. It takes the form of a green metal disk that is about 60cm in diameter and as thick as a palm (it's about as large and thick as a standard bicycle wheel). It also has red flames erupting from its sides, which may appear frightening but are are harmless to Amaterasu and anyone else. It is made to appear or disappear just about instantly at Amaterasu's will and lays on her back while not in use. Funnily enough, even without being physically attached to Amaterasu's body it doesn't fall off even if she stands upright or lays on her back.

The Mirror Reflector can be used for defensive purposes mainly, acting as a heavy but strong shield. Amaterasu controls it by directing it with her hands or head rather than physically touching it because it has no handles. Its unwieldiness means that Amaterasu needs at least half a second to get it into place, and cannot hold it up for long before her concentration breaks (2 seconds at most). It can only be deployed within half a meter of Amaterasu's body. Note that it acts as a regular shield. The "Reflector" part of its name is owed to that it can be used as a mirror, but it does not "reflect" attacks.

The other possible usage for the Mirror Reflector is as an offensive weapon at short ranges. As for when Amaterasu uses it to defend herself, she needs about half a second to attack with it and cannot attack at a range greater than half a meter from her body. By swinging her arm or head she has the mirror perform a 180° slashing arc, hitting targets with its thick flat side before returning to her back. Amaterasu can use this a maximum of 3 times in a row before needing to catch her breath for a few seconds.

Both usages tire Amaterasu somewhat as she is, after all, wielding a large metal disk.
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Ink Splotch (300, Physical Strength, Debuff Proficiency)
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A much simpler application of Amaterasu's Celestial Brush, she drags the brush across an opponent's face, blinding them with black ink. Opponents afflicted this way are unable to see anything until they clean themselves in any way, which takes them at least 5 seconds. The ink also disappears on its own after 20 seconds if the victim has not cleaned themselves by then.
While there is no "cooldown" on this ability it requires Amaterasu to get close to an opponent as the maximum range of this is the reach of her arm (or tail, in wolf mode), thus exposing herself to attacks while using it.
Ink Splotch only affects sight - all other senses as well as Enhanced Senses, Foresight etc. remain unaffected. It also deals no damage.
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Blade of Kusanagi and Ink Splotch are good to go.

Mirror Reflector: "maximum of 3 times in a row before needing to catch her breath for a few seconds." How long is a few seconds? Be specific, provide a minimum recovery time.