02-15-2017, 03:44 PM
(02-15-2017, 02:37 AM)Dawnika Snow Wrote: I'm nominating A Girl and A Goron for a great writing bonus. Zack, as if it needs to be stated, is an exceptional writer and made a really great story. It was compelling and even funny at times. The twist at the end when things weren't so personal caught me off guard and I like that.(Though I knew she would come back. XD) Anydoodles, great story, need to read more of Zack's work.
Wow, it was actually an amazing read. I deeply enjoyed how you (Zack) fleshed out the characters. The characters were just simply amazing and utterly precious. I love the contrast of how Baldur is the big huge strong Goran capable of whoopin' ass, but then he's pretty like, awkward around Brooke at first. I expected him to be real bold, so the contrast was incredibly nice. The combat you did write was very well done and I could picture it clearly in my head. Plus, that ending though! So sweet. <3
I'm actually gonna bump this to Exemplary, as it was remarkable. It meets the word requirements at 12,325 and it was pretty clean of errors.
Zack Fair - 689 OM
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