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Move Creation Workshop
(02-06-2017, 11:33 AM)Jacket Wrote: How about this?

Ithaca 37 Stakeout: (600)

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A shotgun that has the capacity to hold four twelve gauge shots. The range on the weapon can go from short to medium. There is a spread in the shots that is 4 feet in width and can reach up to 20 yards (the maxed range) even hitting multiple targets that are within the spread's width. Damage wise, it is effective up close but not for medium range which does a quarter of damage. For each round that is fired, it is required for a pump action so that the fresh buckshot can enter the chamber which will take one second between shots. Each gauge will be reloaded individually which takes at least one second. For a full reload, that will take 4 x 1 seconds. This weapon can also be shot with one hand holding it due to the pistol grip and can be pumped with one hand also.

You may want to note HOW Jacket can pump it with one hand, since that same hand would be occupied with holding the gun. Also, the bolded parts could use rewriting, I think, because the way it's written I find it confusing to read.
I would suggest something like this:

"The pellets fired can reach up to 20 yards. They spread in an outwards cone with a spread of 4 feet at max distance and can hit multiple targets as a result. However, because of the spread the damage greatly decreases with distance as fewer pellets hit. It is most effective at close ranges where all pellets can hit a single target."

and

"Thanks to the pistol grip it can be held, shot and even pumped with one hand, leaving the other free to do other things."


Of course, it's ultimately up to you how you want to word the move. If you think it's good as it is, I say you can submit it for approval.
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Move Creation Workshop - by Omni - 07-25-2015, 03:25 AM
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