01-01-2017, 05:37 PM
I'm going to nominate Cold, Cold Path, and a few others that continue the topic such as Ballad vs Renji: (A Tale of Two Killers), Demons in the Snow(Koal vs Dawn IC), Scarecrow VS Mechromancer, The demon vs the robot. This story was very fun to participate in and to read. I really enjoyed reading what Renji, Dawn, Koal, Chara, Claptrap, Ballad, Gagie, on what they would say or how the plot when on not to mention the fight were at some points intense and brutal. The way Ballad and Renji's l conflict was very interesting especially when Ballad's hypocrisy and Renji's acts clash at each other. I will also say that some of Chara's and my posts had some bad grammar and can be hard to understand, but we really improves in the middle and end of the story. I will also say Koal with anything done in this story has made really great, for example, the way he reacted to Scarecrow after his speech, "Reality is but a concept of the mind, Doctor. You do nothing to ground people to it; if anything, your actions make people seek a way from it. Hope is vital to any being, you pathetic worm." His voice was but a whisper, but it carried across the cavern, the rasping echoes rebounding back and forth between unyielding ice and rock. "You claim to be better than anyone, but in all honesty, were all damned." (Virgil Hart, Cold Cold Path). With all of this being said I recommend this story line as great.


