12-29-2016, 08:20 PM
Creatia
[spoiler] What's the maximum range on the weapon? By that, what do you consider medium to long range? Assuming it's the length of the weapon or within a few inches of it, I think it looks good enough to move to approval. [/Spoiler]
Kelly
[Spoiler] This is an attempt at something that I have never seen before, but I like the concept! Something to keep in mind: This move will be entirely dependent on your reaction time being enough to block the incoming move perfectly. That being said, your default speed is two, so you have normal human reaction times. I have not tried it myself, but I don't think you can move your hand fast enough to stop a bullet as a normal human. That being said, staff might determine that it's based of your tec stat, and in that case, assuming your tec would be above your opponents, you should be good. Move it to approval and see what staff says. Good luck with this concept! [/Spoiler]
Humble Sage
[Spoiler] Gout of embers looks good, except for one thing. In order for it to cause light burns, it technically would require the debuff proficiency because it causes damage over time. Unless it only causes a burning sensation on contact, and leaves after contact ends.
Dash of frost-rime looks good enough to be moved to approval.
Burden blade... I'm not comfortable giving a judgement on it honestly. Debuffs are still kind of a new idea to me, so I recommend letting a staff member or more experienced player look at it.
By linking these moves to one power source, you increase the damage they do by a little. And yes, that does make sense. [/Spoiler]
Eric
[Spoiler] Your looking at the Defense stat determining how much they are affected, specifically in comparison to your attack stat. The higher your attack stat to their defense, the better/longer the effect. Other than that, looking good. [/Spoiler]
Princess Zelda
[Spoiler] Even though you're away, I'm doing up until the last time I see someone offer feedback because I'm trying to practice to maybe one day be staff. So, about the move itself. Can you move while preparing or throwing these? Can you reuse thrown ones if they are picked up again? [/Spoiler]
Chronoire
[Spoiler] I'm not sure about Lunatic... On the one hand, this seems like something you should be able to do. On the other hand, I can't in good faith condone a move that forces a player to change how they feel, no matter why they feel that way, and attack an ally. It just seems a little... unrealistic? Like, the mind is a complex thing, and different things motivate people in different ways. This just seems a little too gamish, you know?
About Whisperings, i'm going to make the same judgement as earlier. I can't condone forcing someone to turn on their allies and attempt to eat them. Again, a staff might say differently, but if it were me, I'd have to say it's a no go. [/Spoiler]
Veritas
[Spoiler] Looks ready to be moved to approval [/Spoiler]
[spoiler] What's the maximum range on the weapon? By that, what do you consider medium to long range? Assuming it's the length of the weapon or within a few inches of it, I think it looks good enough to move to approval. [/Spoiler]
Kelly
[Spoiler] This is an attempt at something that I have never seen before, but I like the concept! Something to keep in mind: This move will be entirely dependent on your reaction time being enough to block the incoming move perfectly. That being said, your default speed is two, so you have normal human reaction times. I have not tried it myself, but I don't think you can move your hand fast enough to stop a bullet as a normal human. That being said, staff might determine that it's based of your tec stat, and in that case, assuming your tec would be above your opponents, you should be good. Move it to approval and see what staff says. Good luck with this concept! [/Spoiler]
Humble Sage
[Spoiler] Gout of embers looks good, except for one thing. In order for it to cause light burns, it technically would require the debuff proficiency because it causes damage over time. Unless it only causes a burning sensation on contact, and leaves after contact ends.
Dash of frost-rime looks good enough to be moved to approval.
Burden blade... I'm not comfortable giving a judgement on it honestly. Debuffs are still kind of a new idea to me, so I recommend letting a staff member or more experienced player look at it.
By linking these moves to one power source, you increase the damage they do by a little. And yes, that does make sense. [/Spoiler]
Eric
[Spoiler] Your looking at the Defense stat determining how much they are affected, specifically in comparison to your attack stat. The higher your attack stat to their defense, the better/longer the effect. Other than that, looking good. [/Spoiler]
Princess Zelda
[Spoiler] Even though you're away, I'm doing up until the last time I see someone offer feedback because I'm trying to practice to maybe one day be staff. So, about the move itself. Can you move while preparing or throwing these? Can you reuse thrown ones if they are picked up again? [/Spoiler]
Chronoire
[Spoiler] I'm not sure about Lunatic... On the one hand, this seems like something you should be able to do. On the other hand, I can't in good faith condone a move that forces a player to change how they feel, no matter why they feel that way, and attack an ally. It just seems a little... unrealistic? Like, the mind is a complex thing, and different things motivate people in different ways. This just seems a little too gamish, you know?
About Whisperings, i'm going to make the same judgement as earlier. I can't condone forcing someone to turn on their allies and attempt to eat them. Again, a staff might say differently, but if it were me, I'd have to say it's a no go. [/Spoiler]
Veritas
[Spoiler] Looks ready to be moved to approval [/Spoiler]
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