The Chosen Undead

[Sarah_Kerrigan]

With those edits, I see nothing else that is wrong; you're approved post this in a new topic in the roster section with an additional reply that at least describes your moves, but preferably becomes an entire character profile. For an example of one check any of the active members' rosters:

Name: Chosen Undead
Level: 1
Spent OM: 4,500
Proficiencies: (1000); Physical Strength (1000)
Powers: (2000); Survival (2000)
Moves: (1500); Sunlight Straight Sword (300), Silver Knight Shield (600), Riposte (300), Backstab (300)
Super Moves:
Transformations:
Summons:
Items:
Bases:
Unlocks:
Base stats:
ATK: 2
DEF: 3
SPD: 2
TEC: 3

I'll post up your log page which you may utilize to make purchases at a later time.

Remember your first IC post should be in the Nexus. Please see the introduction page in the Rules for further details. Afterwards, your free to head to any of the other verses that can be reached from the Nexus.

Edit; Oh yes, ask Omni to change your name as I can't do that.