11-20-2014, 11:05 AM
Just a few things:
Crest Shield: What counts as magic or ki? It may be more clear if you just limit its strength to 'elemental' based attacks. Since magic doesn't work the same here in the Omniverse as in your character's source material. Magic is just too broad of a term with characters from so many different canons. Additionally, a simple shield move will never be able to entirely negate damage in battle - unless it is a Defensive Super Move. Lastly, will you be more open if a parry misses?
Riposte: If your Riposte misses, is your character left vulnerable? Something that you claim is your most damaging Move, should have a pretty steep downside if it fails, or just in general.
Everything else looks good~
Crest Shield: What counts as magic or ki? It may be more clear if you just limit its strength to 'elemental' based attacks. Since magic doesn't work the same here in the Omniverse as in your character's source material. Magic is just too broad of a term with characters from so many different canons. Additionally, a simple shield move will never be able to entirely negate damage in battle - unless it is a Defensive Super Move. Lastly, will you be more open if a parry misses?
Riposte: If your Riposte misses, is your character left vulnerable? Something that you claim is your most damaging Move, should have a pretty steep downside if it fails, or just in general.
Everything else looks good~
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