The Green Gunsmith vs A Familiar, yet Strangely Alien Foe {IC Fight}

[Mark]

Alrighty guys, sorry about the wait. Results are in the spoiler below. The grading system I used is based on Sinestro's score sheet, so please give that a look over before the numbers catch you off-guard. In short, I consider 0 to be the lowest  (not listed on Thaal's sheet, but that's a personal preference for me) and 5 to be the best possible. 2 is site average.

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Round I
Ballad
Description and Clarity: 2.25
Voice: 2.25
Characterization: 2.5
Story: 2
Technical: 2.5
Total: 11.5

Renji
Description and Clarity: 3.25
Voice: 3
Characterization: 3.25
Story: 3
Technical: 2.25
Total: 14.75

Round II
Ballad
Description and Clarity: 3
Voice: 2.5
Characterization: 3
Story: 3
Technical: 2.5
Total: 14.0 + 2 (Super Move) = 16

Renji
Description and Clarity: 3
Voice: 3
Characterization: 3.5
Story: 3
Technical: 2.5
Total: 15.0 + 1 (Super Move) = 16

SP/Artefacts Used
Ballad: 2 SP (Round II)
Renji: 1 SP (Round II)

Other
Renji's Moogle Pill contributed to Ballad taking slightly more damage than he'd have taken otherwise (not the same weight as SP usage, but it was considered in calculations).

HP Totals
Ballad: 6/20
Renji: 8/20

Ballad Score Total: 27.5
Renji Score Total: 30.75

The winner is: Renji. You may kill, banish, or incapacitate your foe in preparation for the next fight.

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