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Approved Move Archive (2013 - May 2015)
#73
Kaen Pyron Wrote:Rift Edge (Requires Ranged Proficiency, Area Attack Proficiency) -300 OM
  • Pyron steps back and sheathes his katana. He charges the attack for a 3 seconds before quickly drawing and re-sheathing. The speed of the attack creates a 1-meter diameter spherical dimensional rift up to 5 meters away and can hit multiple people. It deals damage as if the defender were to be hit with Pyron's katana. At a glance it appears to be a sphere of darkness, but upon a closer look, one can see that it actually appears to be swirling, much like one of those smoke balls. Can only be used once per round. Cannot be used while moving. Original Move: Judgement Cut. I'm just giving it measurements and some description.
Looks fine, approved at 300.

Atelos Wrote:Aura Swords-300
Atelos' permanent aura manifests physically, forming three swords following his commands as if they were controlled by limbs. They cannot extend further than if were held by an arm but has the flexibility to move around his entire body at will. They are not very strong but they are very quick. Does not have any elemental attributions.
Approved at 300. The writing was a little odd so I took the liberty of clarifying it a bit.
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Messages In This Thread
Approved Move Archive (2013 - May 2015) - by Omni - 08-22-2013, 09:10 AM
Re: Move Approval - by PepsiWhirda - 08-28-2013, 06:25 PM
Re: Move Approval - by Proto Man - 09-01-2013, 05:49 PM
Re: Move Approval - by Nanoha Takamachi - 09-02-2013, 02:32 AM
Re: Move Approval - by Ganondorf - 09-05-2013, 07:53 PM
Re: Move Approval - by Omni - 09-06-2013, 06:21 AM
Re: Move Approval - by Omni - 09-06-2013, 07:11 AM
Re: Move Approval - by Omni - 09-06-2013, 09:20 AM
Re: Move Approval - by Nanoha Takamachi - 09-06-2013, 10:32 AM
Re: Move Approval - by Omni - 09-07-2013, 06:50 AM
Re: Move Approval - by Omni - 09-08-2013, 07:06 AM
Re: Move Approval - by Magus - 09-09-2013, 11:58 PM
Re: Move Approval - by Nanoha Takamachi - 09-22-2013, 02:24 AM
Re: Move Approval - by Nanoha Takamachi - 10-03-2013, 06:51 AM
Re: Move Approval - by Nanoha Takamachi - 10-03-2013, 11:28 PM
Re: Move Approval - by PepsiWhirda - 10-04-2013, 04:43 PM
Re: Move Approval - by Proto Man - 10-15-2013, 01:50 AM
Re: Move Approval - by Samus Aran - 01-29-2014, 07:47 AM
Re: Move Approval - by Proto Man - 01-29-2014, 10:57 PM
Re: Move Approval - by Harry Dresden - 02-09-2014, 10:53 PM
Re: Move Approval - by Shang Tsung - 02-12-2014, 01:24 AM

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