Switching: Connor Hound ==> Aegis

[Jade Harley]

Starting Powers: Super Speed (1000 OM), Flight (1800 OM), Master Acrobat (400 OM) (3200/9000)

Change the underlined 9000 to 8000, please!

Starting Moves:
Claws: 300 OM
Basic claws, retractable and 3 inches long fully extended, going down to 1.5 inches fully retracted.

The retracted and fully extended claw 'modes' make this move variable, and thus 600 OM. How long does it take to shift between retracted to extended mode, and vice versa? I'd recommend half a second. Can the claws be out while Aegis is using other moves?

Lightning Arc : 300 OM

(Requires Range and Debuff)

Thanks to his parentage Aegis inherited both breath weapons. Thusly from the Lightningcaller he received the ability to spew lightning. Each arc is slightly random, and sometimes the arcs branch off at the end of the path. Although the arcs can be predicted as they have the tendency to go towards conductive materials. A successful hit on a weak opponent can cause full paralysis for up to a 5 seconds. An arc can reach up to 30 feet.

"they have the tendency to go towards conductive materials" - It sounds like you would need the Homing Proficiency for this, friend! If you want to avoid that, specify whether or not Aegis needs to focus in order to use this move and remove the part about conductive materials. (In other words, does he need to concentrate and target his opponent? If that is the case, how long does readying this move take?)

Is there a cooldown period between the lightning arcs? Specify what makes an opponent "weak" to this move - is it how much damage they've taken, the amount of DEF they have?

Paralysis for 5 seconds is a pretty serious thing for a basic move, and it would need some serious drawbacks to justify it! Maybe it slows an enemy for 5 seconds, or disrupts their attacks instead. Even then, this move must fatigue Aegis somehow. Remember:

Drawbacks of a move might be: its low power, its difficulty to hit with, the long time it takes to charge, the limited number of times it can be used, the fatigue or harm it inflicts on the user, or otherwise.

When the arcs sometimes branch off, is it far enough to merit the Area Attack proficiency? Three feet in diameter is roughly the limit for beams without the Area Attack Proficiency. Is it possible for the move to be interrupted by something (ex. an attack from an opponent) and can Aegis move while performing it or must he remain still? Do the lightning bolts literally move as fast as lightning?

Below are some quotes from the rules that apply to both Acid Spray and Lightning Arc.

Is the target area larger than three feet in diameter? Can it miss and still do damage from 'splash' damage? If yes, you'll need the Area Attack Proficiency.

Can it home in on an opponent without needing to be aimed? If yes, you'll need the Homing Proficiency.

Acidic Spray: 300 OM

(Requires Range and Debuff)

Thanks to his parentage Aegis inherited both breath weapons. Thusly from the Corroder he received the ability to spray acid. This acid is strong enough to chew holes into most materials within 6 seconds of contact. However the spit oxidizes rather quickly, becoming neutral in 8 to 10 seconds. However within this 8-10 and after starting out strong, the acid weakens and slows overtime. The spray can reach up to 20 feet.

"This acid is strong enough to chew holes into most materials within 6 seconds of contact" - I would recommend changing this to "within 6 seconds of contact, this acid is able to burn Aegis' opponent." Or something like that. Remember:

When describing how powerful a move is, try not to use wording like "cuts through skin" or "breaks bones". This is because the actual damage an attack causes will depend not just on the power of the move, but also your opponent's DEF stat in relation to your ATK. It's best to leave this somewhat vague.

How long does it take for Aegis to prepare/charge up this move? Is there a cooldown time between bouts of acid spewing? Does the spray come out as a glob, stream, or a mist, and what does it look like? Does it have a smell? What is the move's area of effect? Remember, 3 feet in diameter is roughly the limit for beams without the Area Attack Proficiency.

Is it possible for the move to be interrupted by something (ex. an attack from an opponent) and can Aegis move while performing it or must he remain still? Is it difficult to aim and does it fatigue or harm Aegis at all to use this move?