11-14-2016, 10:43 PM
(11-14-2016, 10:21 PM)Shay Cormac Wrote:I feels I was just mentioning it because I would totally make that mistake. Again loved your post. And in enjoying how this is going(11-14-2016, 10:12 PM)Red-Hood Wrote:(11-14-2016, 09:49 PM)Shay Cormac Wrote: done
Hey just so your aware. Shay wouldn't know that Red Hood's rea name is Jason Todd. Just keep that in mind when writing dialogue. Otherwise great job I'm Lovering everyone's posts!
don't worry hun, i'm pretty sure i didn't write shay actually saying anything about red hood's real identity ;v if i did, please show me out and end my life
on that note though, of course, i just wanted to narrate everybody's thought processes and actions a bit more accurately than what shay was seeing and thinking at the time, third person is a godsend for just that
You can't stop crime. That's what you never understood. I'm controlling it. You wanna rule them by fear, but what do you do with the ones who aren't afraid? I'm doing what you won't, I'm taking them out.