Official Move Approval IV

[Amber Veritz]

The most moves you can get approved in advance is 5.

@Weiss; You may chose 5 moves to get approved.

Time Dust(Requires Ranged proficiency, Time Manipulation) Tier Two Super Move - 800OM


Amber forms an odd crystal in her hand colour of silver taking two seconds prepare. When smashed into dust the sandy substance explodes into a field of sonic energy that slows down time for everything within the energy, except Amber. The field expands quickly, but doesn't last very long, about 5 seconds. The change in pace is equal to slowing a character down by half their speed, rounded up. This field of effect is a sphere with a 3-meter radius so it’s fairly small, but can be difficult to escape when being attacked by Amber.


Medical Dust(Requires Advanced Regen.) Tier Two Super Move - 800OM

Amber uses her second kind of dust, an odd kind considering her fighting style. This medical dust instantly clears up wounds, strong enough to fix misplaced bones and completely mend wounds in a matter of seconds. This strong dose of medicine is scarce and can’t be used as often as Amber wished she could. It takes about five seconds of application to heal herself.

Time Dust - How long does it take this crystal to form? How fast does this time slow field expand? 10 meters is too large for the slow that you want. Energy spend using super moves can be role played as you like, but it really doesn't matter. If you have the sp for it, you have the energy for it.

Medical Dust - When it comes to healing and regen the amount of sp is the amount of damage you can heal, whether or not 2 damage is a broken limb would really be on a case by case (fight by fight) basis, and the judge that is attributing damage. The move, at a base form, is fine. However, could you re-word/ write it so that is is more general about what it can do, rather than be specific about instantly mending bones (as 2 damage might not even be broken bones).

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