10-12-2016, 08:24 PM
(10-12-2016, 11:46 AM)ElFailzalot Wrote: Renji:[spoiler]
(10-06-2016, 10:06 PM)Renji Wrote: Malicious Presence (300)
This one I'm not sure if it would count as a fodder power or what I would need as prerequisites to make this work.
Having swallowed a countless number of souls Kuzuru’s very presence has become a tangible force. Anyone within 20 meters of Kuzuru can pinpoint his location as if they had basic enhanced senses. Anyone that is aware of his presence feels a tangible sense of danger emanating from him, and those without insight or a sufficiently high TEC skill feel he is stronger than he actually is. This feeling is more profound in secondaries and is used as an intimidation tool for Kuzuru. The demon can choose to increase the potency of this effect, but anyone within 40 meters can pinpoint his location and he can only keep this up for a minute or so before reverting back to the base effect.
Blackout (300) Requires Physical Strength, Debuff Proficiency
Having a potent mastery over raw energy Strazio is able to siphon energy directly from someone’s flesh. He grabs a target and for up to three seconds begins to sap energy from them. The closer to his target’s heart that he grabs the more effective blackout becomes, whereas grabbing a limb produces little effects beyond numbness or dull aching. During this process and for two seconds afterwards Strazio is unable to use any other moves. If he is able to grab his target for the full three seconds he will leave the target feeling groggy and winded for ten seconds, while anything less will last for a fraction of the time.
Malicious Presence: This one...I'm not really sure. I feel like the basic effect of it, beyond people being able to pinpoint his location could work as the way you employed the Suppression power if you ever picked it up, since it similarly masks his real power and such, TEC limit and all. So...that's one option, but I'm not entirely sure.
Blackout: You mention a charge at the end of the move, but nowhere else in the move. Clarify?[/spoiler]
Malicious Presence- Yeah I'm not 100 percent sure either. I want the pinpoint location portion to be a major drawback for being able to seem much more dangerous that he actually is. I want PCs and NPCs to feel like a palpable wickedness emanating from him, more so than him just being a general dick. I almost feel like it would be a fodder power, but I'd like it to potentially be able to affect site NPCs and PCs and such. What would you suggest as the next step to making this a workable thingy?
Blackout - Changed the wording make a bit more sense yo.