Bonus Request Topic/Quest Turn-in Topic

[Ezrihel]

I'm not sure if I need to put the word counts and calculate the bonus since I'm not a judge yet, but I figured why not. Apologies if I shouldn't, but I figured it'd be nice to help the staff out a little in that matter. You'll have to forgive my little comments on each of them, I couldn't help myself in it.

If anyone's interested, I'll offer up Rolling in the 'Deep for Vincent and To Fell the Fel for Kakashi.

So, after sitting down and having a reading binge, I read both of Mark's threads. I'd like to nominate both of them for bonuses actually.

Great Bonus: To Fell the Fel, This was a nice read, however I wasn't completely mind blown by it, that being said, it was very well written. Speaking for the technical points, you nail them all wonderfully, and I very much love how you displayed characterization of the secondaries, though I do think you could have shown much more of their personalities off. The thread has a lot of action, and you describe it pretty well. All in all, I had fun with it!

7,165 words total, +207.68OM for Great Bonus

Exemplary Bonus: Rolling in the 'Deep, whether it's my love for subterfuge or suspenseful sneaking, this thread was a goddamn blast to read. I just found myself getting into this thread much more than the first one. The suspense was believable, there was just enough action to keep me engaged. The threat to Vincent felt tangible here, and I enjoyed that a lot. Also, just to say, how you show the Commander's reactions just makes the entire situation more "real", in a sense that it shows the consequences of everything (Plus the Commander's annoyance was amusing).

10,584 words total, +610.35OM for Exemplary Bonus