Let's Read: Book Club #1

[Proto Man]

(Guu) – I thought that was a unique use of the generic Omniverse introduction. Watch out for your tenses, though. You seem to slip between present and past tense every now and again. That aside, I couldn’t really gain much about Guu from this, other than her grappling with power loss in a rather nonchalant manner. I feel like once you get out of the Nexus and start rolling, you’ll do pretty well. You seem to have the makings of an entertaining style, especially considering your character.

It’s sad that Prinny didn’t feel like he/she/it fit here, because I think Guu and Penguin could have been an entertaining trek through a verse.

Also, while I didn’t read your Nexus thread until just now, I read all your dataverse stuff. I find it really entertaining, and sometime I have more focus (and when it makes sense for my own character), I’ll probably join you on Twitter.

(Desco) – In this thread, I didn’t get much from Desco, other than her likewise struggling with a new reality. I think you were in the other thread, so I’ll read that one next and have another section for you.

Déjà vu

(Everyone) – I enjoyed the mutual ‘We’re all depowered, noez!’ of the first half-ish of your thread. I felt like you all did a decent job leaning on one another as you coped with arriving in the Omniverse. It was a tad bit overwhelming for someone with zero knowledge about any of the characters involved, but I survived.

Once the fight broke out, I felt like the thread’s tone took on a pretty sharp shift, especially as all the various characters tried to cope with everything. Fights with more than 2 people can often become a bit cluster-f**ky, but I thought like you guys handled it pretty well.