02-01-2017, 01:02 AM
If you just give the first two moves a couple more seconds of charge time, then it'll make sense for it to be as fast and powerful as it is. If you want to keep the drawbacks as severe as they are then that's alright I guess, but fighting with broken bones would most definitely need survival (which is why I suggested fractures, as they can be less severe). I know survival uses a sword through the chest as an example, but it does say inhibit and an arm full of broken bones would definitely inhibit you.
Bullwhip - ah, okay. Don't forget that pulling someone into you with the whip will be highly based on ATK. You'd probably need double someone's ATK to pull them towards you without any sort of difficulty.
Microburst - probably make it probably make it 25 meters, with the already 15 meter in diameter ballooning out an extra 25 meters that gives you a coverage of 40m, which is still huge.
Bullwhip - ah, okay. Don't forget that pulling someone into you with the whip will be highly based on ATK. You'd probably need double someone's ATK to pull them towards you without any sort of difficulty.
Microburst - probably make it probably make it 25 meters, with the already 15 meter in diameter ballooning out an extra 25 meters that gives you a coverage of 40m, which is still huge.

