09-12-2016, 09:45 PM
I'm unfortunately not very knowledgeable about most of these characters/sources, but here's a little input regardless!
You seem to have transferred a lot of Yang over to Sabrina, with the gauntlets being found by her. Duplicate moves that take so much priority in combat could make the character feel repetitive, as tempting as it might be to get the RWBY team back together. I would avoid this one unless you have a very strong pull towards this character's personality and a solid plot idea.
Gildarts and Erza are great writers, but so are you. Even if you weren't (which, again, you really are. Take my word for it: you were briefly involved in a star piece quest on Cinnabar Island... I was watching you closely while thinking about TWO of my characters and how it would affect them) I'm confident in saying they would love to tell a story alongside you, so you can dismiss that already irrelevant concern.
Mirajane is my vote, based soley on the fact that the cons you've listed are easily negated by your own writing and direction. Ditto is my other vote, after touching base with Illidan/Jim, but that's simply because its the only source material I'm familiar with, of that list.
Final bit of (worth what you paid for it) advice: I had six characters I was actively considering for my third, but writing a post as them narrowed it down to just two, which made it that much easier to pick one. I didn't do the Nexus entry post, I just wrote a theoretical post involving them already established in the Omniverse. The same methods don't always work for everyone, but that was mine at least.
You seem to have transferred a lot of Yang over to Sabrina, with the gauntlets being found by her. Duplicate moves that take so much priority in combat could make the character feel repetitive, as tempting as it might be to get the RWBY team back together. I would avoid this one unless you have a very strong pull towards this character's personality and a solid plot idea.
Gildarts and Erza are great writers, but so are you. Even if you weren't (which, again, you really are. Take my word for it: you were briefly involved in a star piece quest on Cinnabar Island... I was watching you closely while thinking about TWO of my characters and how it would affect them) I'm confident in saying they would love to tell a story alongside you, so you can dismiss that already irrelevant concern.
Mirajane is my vote, based soley on the fact that the cons you've listed are easily negated by your own writing and direction. Ditto is my other vote, after touching base with Illidan/Jim, but that's simply because its the only source material I'm familiar with, of that list.
Final bit of (worth what you paid for it) advice: I had six characters I was actively considering for my third, but writing a post as them narrowed it down to just two, which made it that much easier to pick one. I didn't do the Nexus entry post, I just wrote a theoretical post involving them already established in the Omniverse. The same methods don't always work for everyone, but that was mine at least.