09-05-2016, 03:45 AM
Wanting to upgrade a move I already have. Proposed changes are as follows:
Old:
New:
Old:
Quote:Flame Slash (Physical Strength, Burst Movement) (300):
Erza takes a moment to infuse the Flame Sword with the power of fire (3 seconds, plus 2 seconds before attacking while she aims), setting all but the hilt of the blade aflame with magical energy. She then rapidly lunges at her enemy with a slash, following it up with a combo of decisive strikes that lasts a few seconds (Though it can be interrupted). The sword then returns to normal, and Erza must take a moment to rest. This move depletes a large amount of magical energy, thereby fatiguing the user.
New:
Quote:Flame Slash (Physical Strength, Burst Movement Area Attack) (300):
Erza takes a moment to infuse the Flame Sword with the power of fire (3 seconds, plus 2 seconds before attacking while she aims), setting all but the hilt of the blade aflame with magical energy. She then rapidly lunges at her enemy with a powerful slash from which magical flame is emitted in a wide arc, expanding in a semicircle in front of Erza for 5 feet before dissipating, before following it up with a combo of decisive strikes that lasts a few seconds (Though it can be interrupted). The sword then returns to normal, and Erza must take a moment to rest. This move depletes a large amount of magical energy, thereby fatiguing the user.
![[Image: Erza_kicks_Happy.gif]](http://images4.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20121027120537/fairytail/images/e/ed/Erza_kicks_Happy.gif)

