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Move Creation Workshop
Wanting to upgrade a move I already have. Proposed changes are as follows:

Old:
Quote:Flame Slash (Physical Strength, Burst Movement) (300): 

Erza takes a moment to infuse the Flame Sword with the power of fire (3 seconds, plus 2 seconds before attacking while she aims), setting all but the hilt of the blade aflame with magical energy. She then rapidly lunges at her enemy with a slash, following it up with a combo of decisive strikes that lasts a few seconds (Though it can be interrupted). The sword then returns to normal, and Erza must take a moment to rest. This move depletes a large amount of magical energy, thereby fatiguing the user.

New:
Quote:Flame Slash (Physical Strength, Burst Movement Area Attack) (300): 

Erza takes a moment to infuse the Flame Sword with the power of fire (3 seconds, plus 2 seconds before attacking while she aims), setting all but the hilt of the blade aflame with magical energy. She then rapidly lunges at her enemy with a powerful slash from which magical flame is emitted in a wide arc, expanding in a semicircle in front of Erza for 5 feet before dissipating, before following it up with a combo of decisive strikes that lasts a few seconds (Though it can be interrupted). The sword then returns to normal, and Erza must take a moment to rest. This move depletes a large amount of magical energy, thereby fatiguing the user.
[Image: Erza_kicks_Happy.gif]


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Move Creation Workshop - by Omni - 07-25-2015, 03:25 AM
RE: Quick Questions II - by Clownpiece - 11-13-2016, 11:10 PM

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