Move Creation Workshop

[Creatia]

You're working on an outdated version of the move. This is the real version: http://omniverse-rpg.com/showthread.php?...5#pid80325

Like Weiss said, the two statements below are kind of contradictory:

The venom requires minute concentration, so less so that it can be interwoven with punches, kicks, and claw attacks easily. Venom Spit can be used while moving.

Venom Spit cannot be used with other moves.

So what you're saying is: even though it can be used with punches, kicks, and claw attacks (which are moves, I think), it can't be used with other moves? It's kind of confusing. In terms of tweaking, may I suggest the latter quote? It feels much more balanced given the rest of the move description and adds up better with the following phrase:

It takes around 3 seconds for Glory to open her mouth all the way and concentrate on spitting the venom.

Also, the weaknesses here seem a little off balance to me as well. There needs to be a drawback: maybe she can't use the move again during that battle? Or she has to remain still? Or all her other senses are cut while she's focused on shooting the venom? Just tossing a few suggestions out there as a springboard.