Official Move Approval IV

[Eda]

Shining Victory: I understand the slowness but I was more looking for a number. Maybe 1 MPH or something? Just trying to remove any ambiguity. So 75 feet is the maximum size at the 50 foot version is just if it’s not charged to full power? Also bear in mind that with an attack this large the damage will be watered down a good deal vs. a smaller attack that hits only one thing.

I know that going into this , retooling it for final approval 

Move : Love Love Shining Victory ( T1 super ) ( Requires ranged proficiency , homing proficiency , area attack proficiency ) ( 600 om 
) Description : A 50 foot in diameter ball meant for taking out a mob of enemies all at once , made of pink light energy 
Speed : Very slow - 10mph 
Damage : Large
Stamina drain : Moderate
Distance : Far but looses effectiveness after 45 feet 
Focus needed to cast and keep on target
Can not be used while moving
Can not be charged while moving 


Drawbacks : The large size of this attack makes it incredibly slow and easy to dodge 

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Move two : 


Name : Eda Special combo ( 300 ) ( Requires strength proficiency ) 
Description : A combination of charged strikes , finishing the combination with a blast of lightning 
Damage : Moderate
Stamina drain : Low
This attack is a melee combination and could only be used at close range 

Drawbacks : Eda's low str and def will make this attack hurt her almost as much as what she is hitting normally

Shining Victory is approved.

For the Special Combo, is the lightning bolt thrown from the hand or something, or does it just strike from the sky? If it's a projectile you'll need to list its dimensions and range (I'm assuming since it's described as lightning that the speed is comparable to like, lightning from a storm. If not, I'd list that too).

Response : Would be a combo ending palm blast of lighting , the speed on this would be exactly that . Think naruto's rasengan , as for the dimensions it might be an n/a since its a single target strike . I might still need to refine it yet , if so let me know

working on one last thing but got my second big move so am happy <3